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Hi, Brian is right, there are exposure problems, but I see that you set the camera up to under-expose by 2/3 of a stop. That's your main problem.
A nice capture, though a tad soft. You shouldn't be afraid to give a bird a bit more room in the frame. By the look of it this is a big crop. Giving the bird a bit more from would, it's true, reduce it's size in the image but at the same time it would appear to be sharper. The key is where has the subject got to go? At the moment it looks like it's in a box and looks a bit cramped. Keep trying, we're all learning.
Hi Gary and welcome to the site. First of all it's a bold first upload as there are some fantastic fast jet images on here, and it's a good start.
HI Steven, I really like architectural shots like this which challenge the viewer. I'd like to see another version where you've stepped to the left a little or you crop the right, because at the moment the strong curved vertical cuts the image in two so the top right is somewhat disconnected. Another angle might not work, but I think it's worth the try.
A nice shot Kathryn, though I might have darkened the wall slightly. You don't need to sharpen every time, but if you do then only do it after you have resized. Use unsharp mask for this as the last thing you do. If you are using Photoshop or Elements, an alternative is to use the High Pass Filter, which I find more subtle than unsharp mask.
A fine shot. Just as a matter of information. What you see through polarising sunglasses and a polarising filter won't be the same necessarily. When you fit a filter and you turn it to get maximum effect in the sky the filter is at a different angle to that for sunglasses. They are set at the angle that reduces reflections off shiny surfaces which is a different angle from the one that darkens skies and reduces haze. Also you need to be aware that polarisers work best when the sun is to one side of you. Looking at your shadows it would have been effective. Good polarisers are not cheap and as Banehawi has said you'll need for each lens diameter. Also for wide angles you'll need to be cautious about vignetting. Polarisers can be quite deep and often cause intrusive vignettes.
Hi, this is a good first attempt, but it's neither a shot of the memorial nor of the sky. If you want to get the idea of space around the memorial you'll need to use a wider angle lens. What you've used is a fairly long lens even at its shortest focal length. I would suggest maybe about 30mm to give more sense of where the memorial is placed and also to show more of the sky and that lovely cloud.
A nice try, but the shutter speed is too low at that focal length so there's camera shake. You need to be using about 1 over the focal length you are using or 1/1500s in this case to get acceptable sharpness. Looking at your EXIF you could have used ISO200 and an aperture of f11 to give you roughly 1/600 for your shutter speed. In addition lenses are at their best at between f8 and f11 so you're not gaining anything with f20; in effect you are trading sharpness for depth of field and at the distance you are shooting to an aircraft depth of field is not so important as sharpness. I hope this helps,
A well caught scene, and well done to start uploading. I could think of a few things to do to improve it. I think if you cropped about a third of the left and top, so that the start of the snow on the beech is close to the edge. If you crop the featureless sky to the same extent would still leave you with a good impression of the conditions and would give the forlorn figure much more prominence. Try it at home to see what I mean.
OK here we go. First i like this one from the point of view of mood. I would have tried a version with a faster shutter speed to freeze the sea. Sometimes that works too.