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vulture

Camera:Sony Alpha 300
Lens:70-300
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:bird of prey
Username:albo68 albo68
Uploaded:30 Apr 2009 - 2:13 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Pets / captive animals, Wildlife / nature
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ashminder
ashminder  6
30 Apr 2009 - 3:43 PM

Hi,

Ive uploaded a mod which attempts to bring out some of the lovely detail on the underneath of the wings.

Ash.

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PatrickDodds
30 Apr 2009 - 8:30 PM

ooh a vulcan bomber. Nice one. I like the mod a bit better because the contrast adds to the drama. Our friend looks a bit fat?

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8759 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1591 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2009 - 1:01 PM

Hello, Allan. I like the close shot, it's quite dramatic, with good dof, but I feel there is a lot more detail that can be brought out, and the image is also a little soft. I cropped the left because I preferred the composition that way, brightened overall, lifted the shadows, increased the highlights, sharpened the focus and increased the saturation. I selected the white round the head, removed the blue and darkened it. Working on the original will probably be better because I created quite a bit of digital noise in this editing, so ran noise removal over it in my second modification.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 1 May 2009 - 1:04 PM

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