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Camera:Sony Alpha 300
Lens:70-300
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:glasgow uni
Username:albo68 albo68
Uploaded:15 Apr 2009 - 4:22 PM
Tags:Architecture, General, Landscape / travel
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BarryC123
BarryC123 e2 Member 643 forum postsBarryC123 vcard Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2009 - 4:46 PM

Very impressive tower.
I attempted to add a bit of colour to the sky, tho i'm well aware such a concept is a bit unusual for Glasgow !

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2009 - 3:09 PM

Hello, Allan. A nice interesting piece of architecture with lovely turrets and arches, but the image is very flat, quite soft and the building is not straight. There is a lot of detail that can be brought out in editing, but the image is quite underexposed. There wasn't much you could do about the sky, but on a day when it looks a bit more dramatic, you may like to try this again, and I have no doubt that if the sun were shining on this building, there would be far more detail, light and shadow upon it. In my modification, I straightened the building, cropped a bit from top and bottom, lightened it, increased the saturation, adjusted focus, added a bit of contrast and sharpened. A lot more detail has been revealed.
Pamela.

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