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21/09/2008 - 9:09 PM

layla

laylaHi Darren, I haven't done much portrait work and certainly no studio work so you may want to take this with a pinch of salt, I would have left the legs of the couch in and would have asked the model to uncurl her toes, perhaps a warmer tone on the skin would help get the "nice skin" look your after and I would drop the blur effect for a while, also remember the thirds and try to get the models face or eyes in that area.
As I said Darren this is only my thoughts for what they are worth, you are well on your way to achieving what you're after, well done
Regards Alex
18/05/2008 - 7:05 PM

Body beautiful

Body beautifulWelcome Paul, I also have to agree with the above comments but you have taken the shot so why not try and salvage something from it, I would change it to black and white and add a photo grain filter and perhaps play about with the contrasts etc. You appear to have a willing model there so take a little more time and do her justice, look forward to seeing more of your work
Regards Alex