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I took this photo at Disneyland, October 2010. It was a lucky shot, as a child played on the steps.

Any suggestions or comments you may have would be welcome as I am a novice photographer just starting out Smile

Camera:Canon Rebel XSI
Lens:50mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Childhood Dream
Username:ABurke ABurke
Uploaded:22 Oct 2010 - 7:39 AM
Tags:Beauty, Child, Dream, Female, Garden, Girl, Kid, Portrait, Portraits / people
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debu
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India
22 Oct 2010 - 7:44 AM
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Great shot.
debu

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ABurke
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United States
22 Oct 2010 - 7:46 AM
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kindness.

tull
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181 forum posts United Kingdom
22 Oct 2010 - 8:03 AM
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Well composed, a lovely shot.

Mark.

andylea
andylea (e2 Member)
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36 forum postsandylea vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Oct 2010 - 8:24 AM
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great comp wonderful colour and detail a beautiful capture Wink
andy

k_words
k_words (e2 Member)
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k_words vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
23 Oct 2010 - 7:50 PM
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Excellent shot - love it !!
Terry

DRicherby
2 Dec 2010 - 5:06 PM
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Featured e2 photo at the moment.

This is delightful! Since you're asking for suggestions, the girl is rather central in the frame. Since she's looking to the right, we're naturally tempted to follow her gaze, which takes us out of the photograph. It would be better to have her in the left half of the frame, so there's more space in front of her than behind. The rule of thirds usually works well for scenes like this.

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