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14 Oct 2010 - 6:28 PM

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AnaKa

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14 Oct 2010 - 6:28 PM

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Thank you Alvar!

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14 Oct 2010 - 6:51 PM

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Hello Richard, to be honest with you I exposed for the model and wanted to get the plants to her left right... I thouhgt that didn't matter as it's in the background... Do you think that the middle bit shouldn't be so blown out? I can try and fix this.

I don't quite understand your moving more to RHS sentence... what is RHS, what do you mean?

Thank you
Ania

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14 Oct 2010 - 9:18 PM

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Both images are good but I prefer V1. I like the look of confidence in model’s face and the body posture. For some reason in this image I like the way eyes just look back at you. And, I have to agree with Richard, harsh light in the middle ground is distracting.

Perhaps use of PS to take out that harsh light……..

Sushil

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14 Oct 2010 - 9:25 PM

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Hi Ania, yes that is better the model is more the subject now rather then your eyes being drawn to the harsh light.
Regards Richard

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14 Oct 2010 - 9:55 PM

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I think Rich meant Right Hand Side, Ania.

Did you think about trying a bit of fill in flash? That would have balanced the background and foreground very easily.

Cheers, Goggz

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15 Oct 2010 - 1:38 PM

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Quote: Thank you Shush, I did do it in v2, I don't know if it was visible when you had a look or not?

Ania

Hi Ania, when I posted my comment yesterday your V2 (corrected version) was not there. Anyway, this looks much better.

Sushil