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Wrapped in another world, creative and intense.

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Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:18-55mm kit
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Lost In Music & Light
Username:andihun65 andihun65
Uploaded:8 Sep 2009 - 8:49 AM
Tags:Fashion, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people, Wedding / social
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7328 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
8 Sep 2009 - 12:15 PM

Pity that this isn't getting more attention, it needs careful study but is well worth it. I love the effect of the lighting, and the sense of concentration plus movement.
Given that it's not the full figure, the feet being missing, I wonder if a closer crop would be stronger. Crop off a sliver at the top, to just below the microphone top left, then crop the bottom to a bit below the knees to give a square frame - I think it would focus attention on the hand/eye relationship which is what reallly matters.
Moira

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andihun65
andihun65  5
8 Sep 2009 - 2:19 PM

Thank you for your comments and advice, I will try the crop soon.
Andrew

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