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Well ,

Apples do see , and they like to fall off trees eventually.

Finding summers hard these days , the bee shouldn't probably be there.

but then again ....

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A100
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Focal Length:15mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.0
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Looking for the summer
Username:Eviscera Eviscera
Uploaded:19 Jun 2011 - 9:21 PM
Tags:Changes clearly taking place, General, No kiss and tell
Votes:79

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Eviscera
Eviscera (e2 Member)
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19 Jun 2011 - 9:23 PM
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Im smoked , to much stress,

So this is a good listen for the summer

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G6DDS
G6DDS (e2 Member)
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19 Jun 2011 - 9:29 PM
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Not your usual dark self Dave, but i still love it.

fazzer
fazzer (e2 Member)
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fazzer vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jun 2011 - 9:35 PM
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like the all seeing apple....makes you wander

AlleyCatz
19 Jun 2011 - 9:40 PM
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Near the wind there's offshore waters.....

Tides and currents of long lost daughters.

Apples fall just like eve did.

For your stress Dave

ATB Smile

~Alley~

joseph
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England
19 Jun 2011 - 9:56 PM
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Smashing image...Beautiful colours!

wyatturp
19 Jun 2011 - 10:14 PM
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3d canvas in the landscape, nice work

kaybee
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3450 forum posts Scotland23 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jun 2011 - 10:29 PM
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Are you sure you don't mean "I have smoked"?
It would explain a lot

franfoto
19 Jun 2011 - 11:16 PM
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A lovely bold 3D and great music to go with it. Another unique addition to the Eviscera folio

Fran

very nice thoughtful image
Rick

SlowSong
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20 Jun 2011 - 9:18 AM
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I like the contrasts. Hot, hot desert sand and, more true to life in the UK at the moment, the dark stormy clouds. Superb construction and bright colours. Like it.

nuff said .

BlueRoom
BlueRoom (e2 Member)
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20 Jun 2011 - 4:20 PM
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I think this is marvelous. So many odd little touches of imagination and composition that still add up overall to give an almost classical sense of balance. I don't think the bee is in the wrong place, but I'd rather like it to be a crab. Smile
I could look at this for hours... (days if it had the crab)

Eric

Suehh
Suehh (e2 Member)
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39 forum postsSuehh vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2011 - 8:47 PM
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Love that seagull/fish. Now I know why I don't eat apples

Eviscera
Eviscera (e2 Member)
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20 Jun 2011 - 9:10 PM
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Good evenin !

Been out stuck in traffic all day.

mmm , well Im real glad this didnt bomb , it was trying a new style mixing thing and conceptuals gotta be one of the hardest most overlooked things in safeland !


Thanks for the musak Alleycat , good chill.

And Eric and Molliedoggystle , honoured , I do try me flippin best to keep this media movin forward , Tis a lonely path sometimes wondering if its crap or gonna be seen as such Wink

Enjoy the rain...

backbeat
backbeat (e2 Member)
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130 forum postsbackbeat vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2011 - 11:06 PM
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i really like this Dave...very original, and strangely cheering also

phil

Scaramanga
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21 Jun 2011 - 8:29 PM
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Had very little connection at home for browsing. I'd love a closer look at these last three on a larger monitor at work in the morning,writes note to self.

Eviscera
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21 Jun 2011 - 8:43 PM
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In hindsight , there really should have been a crab instead.

And should have dimped the apple filter "pinch" before the eye .

mmm , but I do love the scale of the elements Smile

Tis a learn , Illl do darker when they talk again...

(Nutter alert lol)

imagio
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England1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2011 - 9:01 PM
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The birds and the bees, and mans downfall! a humble apple with the all seeing eye watching, it was all rosy in the garden of eden, then eve took a bite and we became mortal..My sense of realisation does me down sometimes Dave, nice song nice singer, I have his music. chill....This is surrealism at its best mate..

Bernie

Last Modified By imagio at 21 Jun 2011 - 9:02 PM
Eviscera
Eviscera (e2 Member)
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21 Jun 2011 - 9:59 PM
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Thanks Bernie , means a lot.

pennyspike
24 Jun 2011 - 9:24 PM
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Different style & for what it's worth I like it .

Source
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25 Jun 2011 - 1:56 PM
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Stunning and beautiful creation,full of wonderful imagination
-source

Chinga
Chinga (e2 Member)
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25 Jun 2011 - 8:43 PM
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A fantastic piece of surrealist art! Love the happy colours!
Whatever you'd been smoking... Have some more! IB

polly470
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26 Jun 2011 - 1:38 PM
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Have another award from me...no need to say anything...all been said above..
P
xxx

BURNBLUE
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26 Jun 2011 - 1:42 PM
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Great stuff.

si.

Nick_w
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26 Jun 2011 - 3:57 PM
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I like it Dave .. although I'm not sure its quite the finished article. The message maybe a little too obvious - but then again thats maybe what you were trying to say. Birds and the Bees, Apple of temptation, but been watched / fear of been seen / found out.

The one element that doesn't quite work is the Bee, I cant put my finger on why.

DaveU
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28 Jun 2011 - 10:27 PM
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This is as near to landscape photography as you'll come Dave ..... so much better than the zillionth shot of Twistleton Scar, or the quintillionth shot of that cute little bridge at Knob-End-Cum-Wasserdale.

Yeah, the bee should buzz off but for me that zingy orange panel with the apple is genius. I'd maybe drop it down slightly to stagger it from the panel to it's right though. Avant-garde me Smile

Mynett
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137 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2011 - 10:49 PM
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you always make me smile, think, read, listen, enquire.... you inspire.

Linda

Nick_w
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29 Jun 2011 - 7:44 AM
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Dave, Just noticed something - If you are to print this there are two smudges - left hand edge, where the cloud meets the sky.

I now know why I'm unsure about the bee - it looks cartoonish a bit of a characterture, as DaveU says I'm not sure its needed.

cassiecat
29 Jun 2011 - 8:10 AM
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creative and eye catching.lesley

Eviscera
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29 Jun 2011 - 6:25 PM
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Thanks !

mmm, well as mentioned , it was a try at a different style of mix and scale , and that Bee is important in its "weighting". Avant-Garde indeed.

Having said that , couldn't get the blend mode right using such a low res , high crop bee , so I see what you mean Nick , it fades into tonal pixel insignificance perhaps.


And (In a Michael Caine sort of voice)

Those smudges are authentic Dust bunnies , intended to give it sense of being straight from the camera.

Bloody purists Wink

But great advice , thanks.

costas
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4 Jul 2011 - 5:36 PM
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Superb work Dave.

NeilWigan
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5 Jul 2011 - 7:54 PM
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THought it was potatoes that had eyes,but that wouldnt look as pretty.Leave the bee be ,as it were .Transitional is good.

dorricottpix_photography
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6 Jul 2011 - 11:17 PM
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It is good . . . very good.

Bruce

megamuff8
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11 Jul 2011 - 5:45 PM
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Me pirate is doing some great work, sorry I've missed sooo much!
As Always,
W x

arhb
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1 Aug 2011 - 10:43 PM
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Excellent.

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