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My favourite from those of Ellie and Sarah.

Would value any comments or advice on how to improve my shooting and post production skills

regards

Dave

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Feb 2013 - 2:12 PM
Focal Length:80mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:ellie 3
Username:david1810 david1810
Uploaded:18 Aug 2013 - 6:48 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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ddolfelin
ddolfelin e2 Member 234 forum postsddolfelin vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 7:14 AM

I wouldn't dream of telling you how to improve this image - those eyes sprang out from the screen.
Great job.

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Russell_Charles

Stunning. Composition, lighting and processing perfect.

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S_Psharma
S_Psharma  2 India1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 7:23 AM

Excellent portrait with beautiful composition.

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DeSilver
DeSilver e2 Member 7DeSilver vcard England11 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 7:35 AM

Absolutely stunning eyes, very well captured.


David.

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John56
John56  1 Ireland
18 Aug 2013 - 7:37 AM

What stunning eyes. Beautiful photo.

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blakeyguin
blakeyguin e2 Member 7blakeyguin vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 9:07 AM

you could improve this shot by um lets think, no sorry cant think of a thing Smile smashing shot, super lighting, great comp and love the way you croped it. the only way i can see to make this great shot a tiny bit better would be to use an octaganal softbox to give a round catch light in the eyes, but thats just my humble opinion.
Stephen

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Quoise
Quoise e2 Member 1287 forum postsQuoise vcard United Kingdom
18 Aug 2013 - 9:12 AM

Beautiful eyes

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RLF
RLF e2 Member 4RLF vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 9:12 AM

Outstanding capture...really magical eyesGrin
I'm in love!Tongue

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Ian-Jones
Ian-Jones e2 Member 11129 forum postsIan-Jones vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 9:47 AM

It's a fantastic image. My only quibble is that the face is a little too flawless next to detailed weave of the cloth.

Ian

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Curtain
Curtain e2 Member 6Curtain vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 9:52 AM

This is an amazing shot with great lighting and colour and what beautiful eyes. I'm with RLF !! You may wish to consider rotating the canvas slightly to bring the eyes onto level, but that's the only suggestion I can think of and it's all down to personal choice anyway. A truly fantastic capture.
Nick

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
18 Aug 2013 - 11:42 AM

Wow what a buzz I did not expect this much positive feedback.

Curtain thank you so much for my first award what a motivator. Good read on the eye level, I will fix - thanks

I think I was lucky, the shot was taken on my east facing balcony of my unit hence natural light - you can see me in the catch light.

Having a beautiful model makes it easier.

Thanks again for your comments and votes

Dave

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Fred263
Fred263 e2 Member 2Fred263 vcard United Kingdom
18 Aug 2013 - 11:48 AM

Eye-catching & great image with a mysterious aurora.

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Alda
Alda  146 forum posts United Kingdom27 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 1:22 PM

Stunning GrinGrinGrin

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Eastlands
Eastlands e2 Member 3653 forum postsEastlands vcard Northern Ireland3 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 2:36 PM

My advice is keep doing what you are doing, a simply stunning image, John.

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4660 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom63 Constructive Critique Points
18 Aug 2013 - 8:00 PM

Wow !!!!!!!.......terrific shot, & top quality !!

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Rapido57
Rapido57  4 England
18 Aug 2013 - 9:27 PM

For me, this is top quality - wonderful shot, keep it up!

Paul

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david1810
david1810  2 Australia
19 Aug 2013 - 4:55 AM

Alda

thankyou for the award. The first submission where I have received any awards.

regards

Dave

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easyjazz
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19 Aug 2013 - 10:28 PM

Absolute perfection

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michaelo
michaelo e2 Member 8michaelo vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2013 - 9:56 PM

beautiful !!!!!!!!!!

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