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Recording media:TIFF (digital)
Title:The Kiss
Username:andy210966 andy210966
Uploaded:15 Apr 2012 - 4:39 PM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Disintergration, Face, Kiss, Lips, Swirls, Textures
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Scottishlandscapes
Scottishlandscapes (e2 Member)
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67 forum postsScottishlandscapes vcard Scotland33 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 5:26 PM
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A shattering experience, a first kiss is like that sometimes with someone special.

You old romantic with a wonderful digital imagination.

Dougie

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sherlob
sherlob (e2 Member)
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1993 forum postssherlob vcard United Kingdom116 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 6:27 PM
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I like the concept Andy - and your manipulation skills far surpass my own, but in this case I just can't get past the white object in the mouth of upper face. It looks like she has a torch place in her tonsils and its shiny off her teeth. The spot really impacts on what would otherwise be a good composition - it just dominates and draw the eye too much imho. Also there seems to be an effect of one being behind the other - an alignment, but not a kiss as the title suggests.

Still I wish I had your imagination to conjure such creations (not to mention the PS skills to carry them out).

Adam

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andy210966
andy210966 (e2 Member)
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andy210966 vcard Wales119 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 6:44 PM
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Thank you for you critique Adam. The mouths are over one another but perhaps the angle doesn't make it so obvious. As for the white, yes I agree and I'll have to go back to that for electronic versions as the print isn't so 'in your face' and there is tooth detail in there - I may reposition the lighting to tone it down a touch. Thanks again for your valued comments.

Andy

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 8:02 PM
1

Like your creativity Andy, a slight tweak on that white area and you have a fine creative image
Regards Richard

BillyGoatGruff
BillyGoatGruff (e2 Member)
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188 forum postsBillyGoatGruff vcard England196 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 8:13 PM
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Great stuff, Andy.

Got to echo Adam's comment, but it looks like you're already on top of that.
Nice to see something from you after quite a long absence! Smile

pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly (e2 Member)
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208 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom32 Constructive Critique Points
15 Apr 2012 - 10:05 PM
1

good to see you back and posting Andy I am in awe of your skills with PS and once you get the white spot sorted you have a winner here

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