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A shattering experience, a first kiss is like that sometimes with someone special.
You old romantic with a wonderful digital imagination.
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I like the concept Andy - and your manipulation skills far surpass my own, but in this case I just can't get past the white object in the mouth of upper face. It looks like she has a torch place in her tonsils and its shiny off her teeth. The spot really impacts on what would otherwise be a good composition - it just dominates and draw the eye too much imho. Also there seems to be an effect of one being behind the other - an alignment, but not a kiss as the title suggests.
Still I wish I had your imagination to conjure such creations (not to mention the PS skills to carry them out).
Thank you for you critique Adam. The mouths are over one another but perhaps the angle doesn't make it so obvious. As for the white, yes I agree and I'll have to go back to that for electronic versions as the print isn't so 'in your face' and there is tooth detail in there - I may reposition the lighting to tone it down a touch. Thanks again for your valued comments.
Like your creativity Andy, a slight tweak on that white area and you have a fine creative image
Great stuff, Andy.
Got to echo Adam's comment, but it looks like you're already on top of that.
Nice to see something from you after quite a long absence!
good to see you back and posting Andy I am in awe of your skills with PS and once you get the white spot sorted you have a winner here
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