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20/04/2013 - 11:29 PM
Babbling Brook
Great shot in the making with good rendition of the water in the fall, but a little untidy in places, It is subjective but I feel that a slight crop would make for a stronger image, loose the L/H trunk & overhead branch, in this case they distract the eye from the focal point of your picture, there is also a scruffy tangle of small branches & litter just behind & to the right of the trunk, and the patch of water on the same side in the foreground is too light adding further distraction, finally you could trim back the bottom edge roughly in line with the base of that troublesome trunk, try it and see what you think. Note: This all could have been sorted at the taking stage with a little more observation and tighter framing, with landscape it is easy to get carried away with a good location, but it's always worth taking a little more time analyzing your scene and even revisiting at different times of year and to get a fresh perspectives, for instance this place would likely make for a great autumn shoot etc.Hope this helps, good luck
Andy M
16/03/2012 - 5:09 PM










