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I took this yesterday at my favourite bit of coastline. The clouds were amazing earlier (to follow - maybe tomorrow), but these two jet trails were left mirroring the tracking. I used my polarising filter - not sure whether it benefited the image or not. v2 is a mono version. There's a huge boat on the left horizon which you can just see.
Thanks for looking - have a great weekend!
Big thanks to Jim (canonfan) for his UA for Stormcloud III.
Ann

Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:Sigma 17-70mm F2.8-4.5DCMacroAsp.IF HSM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:17 Aug 2012 - 1:42 PM
Focal Length:42mm
Aperture:f/14
Shutter Speed:1/40sec
ISO:100
Title:Tracking
Username:AnnChown AnnChown
Uploaded:18 Aug 2012 - 10:29 AM
Tags:Beach, Landscape / travel, Landscape / travel. clouds, Rye harbour, Sky, Winchelsea beach
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morpheus1955
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18 Aug 2012 - 10:38 AM
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Good morning Ann, what a fabulous image, great pov and composition, I can just see this printed huge and hanging on a wall in the lobby of a modern building Smile Definitely V1 for me

Hugh

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Nice image, 1 for me to.

A.J.

marktc
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18 Aug 2012 - 10:52 AM
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Grrr... This is my third attempt at saying something nice about this picture, for some reason my comments keep disappearing!

Firstly good morning Ann, This image is marvellous and I'm glad that at least my humble UA got there first! I love the composition of this image, the lead in of the trackway to the huge sky with its twin contrails and wispy cloud (I know could also be contrails), which contrast greatly in both colour, texture and emotion with the busy foreground shore, all counterpointed by the lovely turquoise sea and deep blue horizon line.

I too envision it hanging on the wall of a posh hotel, but would much more prefer it on my dining room wall!

An overall wonderful image.

Sorry to have a down though, V2 just doesn't quite work for me, maybe try a high key version in mono???

Last Modified By marktc at 18 Aug 2012 - 10:53 AM
Badgerfred
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18 Aug 2012 - 10:52 AM
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V1 favoured here Ann, like your composition,
Fred.

digital_boi
18 Aug 2012 - 10:57 AM
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good composition and it has to be the colour version for me also

Graham

CarolG
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18 Aug 2012 - 11:07 AM
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A wonderful composition, Ann, and most definitely colour for me Smile Carol

longhoss
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18 Aug 2012 - 11:24 AM
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Superb image
Glyn

SlowSong
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18 Aug 2012 - 11:25 AM
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Has to be colour.
x

BarryC123
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18 Aug 2012 - 11:29 AM
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A lovely composition, and for me anyway the colour is definitely the stronger image.
After all, why photograph that lovely rust only to hide it's beauty?

jdinne
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18 Aug 2012 - 11:50 AM
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Great composition Ann, think as above V1 takes it.

John

Rock
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:02 PM
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It certainly is interesting viewing.

Rock

lifesnapper
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:04 PM
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I like this very much Ann, but V1 with it's natural colour, really takes first prize for me.

John Smile

woolybill1
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:11 PM
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One of my favourite spots, too, and it's a delight to see it again. I love the mirroring of the track with the trails, a happy coincidence that you have really made the best of.
V1 for me, too.
Regards
Bill

Scottishlandscapes
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:28 PM
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...something took off from here and with such violence that the tracks were disturbed, you can still see the trails in the sky above, will they come back? Nobody Knows.

Dougie

AnnChown
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:29 PM
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Quote: ...something took off from here and with such violence that the tracks were disturbed, you can still see the trails in the sky above, will they come back? Nobody Knows.

Dougie

SmileSmile

Joline
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:36 PM
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Hard choice here. I like them both. The mono is slightly more "artistic" and the color is rich in detail.

mrswoolybill
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:37 PM
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Love those tracks in the sky!
When we found this I was so fixated by the rust and pebbles that I never even thought to look up!
Moira

AnnChown
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18 Aug 2012 - 12:58 PM
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Quote: Love those tracks in the sky!
When we found this I was so fixated by the rust and pebbles that I never even thought to look up!
Moira

When the wind is in the right direction, planes come in over here for Heathrow or Gatwick (don't know which), so there's a lot of flight activity - and the possibiity of jet trails.

WhiteRose1
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18 Aug 2012 - 1:08 PM
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I like the negative space of the sky in this, Ann, and the track suddenly disappearing gives a wonderful mystery to the image. In the style of 'Athena Posters' Smile v2 doesn't work with the tint but may as a contrasty plain mono.

fentiger
18 Aug 2012 - 1:18 PM
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A well observed clever composition and definitely No. 1 gets the vote. I agree that No. 2 doesn't work with the tint and may be better going for blacks, whites and greys.

Albert

Cliff1944
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18 Aug 2012 - 1:32 PM
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V1 for me.
Cliff

RonnieAG
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18 Aug 2012 - 1:38 PM
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Like Dougie's comment, Ann: and your own comments are well founded and I concur with them totally.
Ronnie.

pokey110
18 Aug 2012 - 1:44 PM
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Lovely image, nicely captured V1 is my favourite

paskinmj
18 Aug 2012 - 1:58 PM
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Like both versions here. The B&W version edges it for me.
Matt

Rolepics
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18 Aug 2012 - 2:17 PM
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Brilliant composition, making good use of that excellent sky!
Carole

taggart
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18 Aug 2012 - 3:09 PM
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color --- the color in this image is so clear and beautiful, image is easy to read in color, no need to reduce it to graphic monotones!

franken
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18 Aug 2012 - 3:35 PM
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Both work really well Ann.


Ken

achieverswales
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18 Aug 2012 - 5:01 PM
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Must say I love both, so equal points Ann.

Regards

Trev.

ChiliMan
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18 Aug 2012 - 5:29 PM
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Ohhh...DEFinitely V1 for me, Ann. I don't say this often but this is a completely calendar-worthy image. The composition, light, colour, depth of focus...exquisite.

Perfect title too, to describe the echo of the tracks in the sky Smile

Andrew

mikbee
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18 Aug 2012 - 6:30 PM
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Gotta be the colour for me Ann !!
Super shot.
Mick.

oldgreyheron
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18 Aug 2012 - 8:12 PM
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Glorious image Ann, I was full of anticipation when I saw the thumbnail and my expectations were exceeded when I opened the image up. V1 by a mile for me too!

Mike

Ray42
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19 Aug 2012 - 8:56 AM
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Quote: Good morning Ann, what a fabulous image, great pov and composition, I can just see this printed huge and hanging on a wall in the lobby of a modern building Smile Definitely V1 for me

Hugh

Summed this up to a 'T' - I quite agree

annettep38
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19 Aug 2012 - 11:13 AM
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allthough I like v2 for the strict composition it is v1 for me - the colours are an extra bonus.

Tibetan
19 Aug 2012 - 11:24 AM
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Nice lead in with this boat slipway, prefer the colour on this one the contrast from wood to pebbles, regards Leon. GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

pascalg
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20 Aug 2012 - 6:38 PM
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colour version : beautiful!

gajewski
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20 Aug 2012 - 8:03 PM
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Well, I hate to follow the crowd but V1 is my favorite. It is quite possible that you would not have seen the deep blue near the top of the photo and the nice contrast in the clouds without the polarizer but difficult to tell without a comparison shot.
-=\Walter

PaulLiley
22 Aug 2012 - 8:13 AM
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Like the colour version cos it shows up the rich redness of the rusty rails. Nice composition. Paul

Glostopcat
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27 Aug 2012 - 12:05 AM
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The colour version for me, it looks like the railway route to nowhere

Great shot

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