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Tried to recreate a pose I did some months back but it didnt work so tried something a little different instead. Several things wrong with this I think, should I have placed the lights directly in front of Alex and should I have used a reflector?

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Uploaded:26 Oct 2004 - 8:34 AM
Tags:Child portrait, Portraits / people
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leedsgh
leedsgh  10496 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 8:37 AM

Outstanding this one K.

The daring crop works a treat.

She looks so mature here too!

Well done. I dont think there's anything wrong with the lighting, theres enough detail to tell the story even though some may comment that her face appears a little 'washed out'.

I love it.

Great hair stylist too! Was that your handywork?!

Gav

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steffilewis
26 Oct 2004 - 8:38 AM

I think that the lightness of the face contrasts nicely with the hair, so I don't see anything wrong with it. thats a really dangerous crop K! Well done *click*

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philjoel
philjoel  1026 forum posts1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 8:39 AM

This is great (again!! yawn! ;]). I love the composition - really very professional. Also, I don't think there is anything wrong with the lighting at all. How old is she now?! Surely she's growing up faster than normal time!

Another one to be proud of IMHO.

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itsasetamendi
26 Oct 2004 - 8:39 AM

Excellent! the hair really makes this portrait for me.
Gareth

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bytorphoto
bytorphoto  1037 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 8:41 AM

Personally, I think this is exceptional. She has incredible hair, great face and focus on the camera. She is a beautiful young woman and I can't fault the shot. I love the look, the lighting and the strong contrasts. So even if it wasn't what you intended, you've got another great shot again!! Clicked, of course. Keep them coming.

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Daisy_intheMill
26 Oct 2004 - 8:51 AM

She looks more grown up each time we see her. I like the contrast of this shot and her hair and crop great.
Jude

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Pete
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26 Oct 2004 - 8:51 AM

You've turned her into a rock chic! Get her on singing lessons now!!! Oh yes, the photography,...not bad... lol. I like the adventurous off centre crop. The contrast is a bit harsh.

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sacha
sacha  10
26 Oct 2004 - 8:51 AM

I agree with all of the above. Love the feel of the lights.
Sacha

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eafy
eafy  10 Australia
26 Oct 2004 - 8:52 AM

Like it
Click

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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 9:03 AM

Goodness me! Thanks everyone. Gav yes my handywork and washed out was the effect I wanted, Jude she is 8 now although going on 27 at times Wink. If anyone wants to see what I based this on look HERE but because it didnt work quite as I'd hoped I went for a more contrasting, harder edged image.

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shane
shane  10 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 9:03 AM

DON'T TOUCH IT!

This is stunning
I love it, total quality
Click
shane

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jennialexander
jennialexander e2 Member 945 forum postsjennialexander vcard United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 9:05 AM

Looks good to me as is
Jenni

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devon-photographic

Like Shane said, don't touch it, K. Click

Jules

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sebough
sebough  10 Cyprus
26 Oct 2004 - 9:09 AM

I like the relaxed look.Nice work

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johnjohn01
johnjohn01  1258 forum posts England
26 Oct 2004 - 9:13 AM

Great crop, lighting a tad too harsh for me but otherwise it's exceedingly good.

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bikemad
bikemad  1087 forum posts
26 Oct 2004 - 9:24 AM

Love it-its brilliant just as it is.My god doesnt she look grown up!!!!!Beautiful girl.Doesnt she look like you!!!!click

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bole
bole  9
26 Oct 2004 - 9:50 AM

excellent photo.

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mattmatic
mattmatic  10598 forum posts
26 Oct 2004 - 10:18 AM

Yes, yes, yes.
Very, very cool.
Stood out a mile from the thumbnail. Well done!
Matt :click:

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mattmatic
mattmatic  10598 forum posts
26 Oct 2004 - 10:19 AM

Oh yeah, and I like it contrasty Wink

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suleesia
suleesia  9176 forum posts Malaysia
26 Oct 2004 - 10:20 AM

Won't want it any other way! Beautiful piece of work.
Su

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inkarts
inkarts  1061 forum posts1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 10:26 AM

K this is very fine work, as for the hardness or softness it depends on what one is saying though the image thats my view. To me it says assertive but held back. Well done. john

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bigheart.
bigheart.  10 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 11:21 AM

its a great Portrait,
works really well

Steve

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croberts
croberts  102160 forum posts Ireland8 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 11:27 AM

oops. missed this one. what a crackin' portrait. really like everything about this. clicked

Chris

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junglecat
junglecat  10
26 Oct 2004 - 11:33 AM

Love the lighting on the hair. great portrait.

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martinduke
martinduke  1037 forum posts England
26 Oct 2004 - 11:54 AM

Great portrait, love the expression and angle of the camera. A little high on contrast for me IMHO.
Nice work
Martin

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user_absconded
26 Oct 2004 - 12:04 PM

This is a great crop, don't know exactly what you were looking to achieve with this one, but as it stands, it works for me (she certainly doesn't look eight!)
Very nice work.

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paulstefan
26 Oct 2004 - 12:11 PM

Super shot - lighting and composition are perfect for me...
I'm honoured to be next to it in the gallery
Smile
click
Paul

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iscramble
iscramble  1090 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 12:25 PM

Fabulous K. I think the lighting works very well indeed. Nothing more to add except great work.
Cheers
Phil

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jules41
jules41  10197 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 12:26 PM

This to me is such a fabulous shot K,looks excellent in b&w,superb as always*click*
julie

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azzabc
azzabc  10185 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 12:50 PM

This is simply superb. Your best shot yet I think. Wonderful. Get it up on a wall quick.

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icafe
icafe  10 Canada
26 Oct 2004 - 1:02 PM

A very effective composition and lighting that capture the mood very well. It's hard to believe that this is an 8-year old, yet her pose is very mature and professional. Click.
Arthur

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magda_indigo
26 Oct 2004 - 1:18 PM

it creates a different effect, depends what you were after, click (*:*)

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rnixon
rnixon  10180 forum posts
26 Oct 2004 - 1:30 PM

I don't think there's anyting wrong with this at all.

We have a model competition coming up at our club, and I would love to enter something like this, even though I know the judge will reject out out of hand because its not against one of those mottled backgrounds, and theres a lot of "wasted space" on the right. In other words it's a really edgy, up to date image.

Now I wonder if I could get the bread knife to pose with some black gear on?

Richard

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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 1:41 PM

Goodness me again! Well I suppose I'll have to accept this as OK then Wink. K.

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pamnew1
pamnew1  10
26 Oct 2004 - 3:05 PM

Brilliant! well done

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panda
panda  10 England1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 3:55 PM

Absolutely beautiful, sigh!!. I wish I had your expertese. Just brilliant.

Phil

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gemm
gemm  10800 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 4:04 PM

This is an excellent shot! Perfect composition, and I love the light on her hair. omg, she looks so mature! I can imagine this as a CD cover!

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26 Oct 2004 - 4:34 PM

Thanks all. K.

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pfheyes
pfheyes  10254 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 5:56 PM

I think this is excellent - it's a real rock and roll shot, helped along by the harsh light. She looks like a future rock icon here!

Pete

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sugarbird
sugarbird  10223 forum posts South Africa
26 Oct 2004 - 5:57 PM

Excellent K, can't fault your work (wouldn't want to anyway)!!
lol
Jill

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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 6:23 PM

Thank you both. K.

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MartinWait
MartinWait  1088 forum posts England
26 Oct 2004 - 6:25 PM

Quite brilliant.
Fantastic crop.

Martin.

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adversa
adversa  12 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 6:32 PM

Stunning image. Well done! Bill

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willbrealey
26 Oct 2004 - 7:06 PM

Superb portrait, excellent! Love how the lighting brings out the shine in her hair. Love the 'attitude'!

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FrankThomas e2 Member 112762 forum postsFrankThomas vcard United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 7:07 PM

definately nothing wrong with this one K, even the "soot and whitewash" effect seems to work fine

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tull
tull  11181 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 7:10 PM

Stunning K,wonderful portrait.

Mark.

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eddieali1961
26 Oct 2004 - 7:11 PM

Stunning shot.
Eddie.

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Ade_Osman e2 Member 114493 forum postsAde_Osman vcard England36 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 7:14 PM

Like the way the hair falls over the face, the composition is spot on K....click
Ade

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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 7:14 PM

Thanks everyone, lol@Frank - havent heard that expression before! K.

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mellyleth
mellyleth  10212 forum posts United Kingdom
26 Oct 2004 - 7:21 PM

Love the framing and the space. Good work K.

Clicked.

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26 Oct 2004 - 7:59 PM

Thanks Mel. K.

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davidbailie e2 Member 11451 forum postsdavidbailie vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2004 - 8:50 PM

Works well K

Dave

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bassan e2 Member 11bassan vcard
26 Oct 2004 - 9:22 PM

Nice as it is.

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theorderingone
26 Oct 2004 - 9:22 PM

Whatever you did, its superb!!!!

Fantastic treatment also great composition!

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answersonapostcard Site Moderator 1012601 forum postsanswersonapostcard vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2004 - 7:36 AM

Thank you all. K.

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Miles Herbert
27 Oct 2004 - 9:31 AM

K, this is fantastic... the lighting works really well in my oppinion. As has been said, a very gritty 'rock-chick' style image, with tons of impact. I keep saying it, so here goes again, your portrait work is superb.

click

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27 Oct 2004 - 9:38 AM

Thank you Miles, so much. K.

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stevieb  102994 forum posts Panama2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2004 - 12:39 PM

Cracking K. I can just see an album title down the right.
Steve.

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27 Oct 2004 - 12:57 PM

Thanks Steve, think Alex would like this as a poster on her bedroom wall, might see what I can do for her.

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amps  10225 forum posts United Kingdom
27 Oct 2004 - 4:39 PM

Great shot K. like the pose and composition, good crop and framing, i do think the contrast is a bit harsh and you have lost some detail of the face, but it works. Well done.

Alan.

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willabob
willabob  10
27 Oct 2004 - 7:03 PM

she is really beautiful.

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27 Oct 2004 - 7:05 PM

Thanks Alan, harsh is what I was after after the softness of the image I based it on but thank you for your comment. Willa, I thank you too, take care. K.

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Nelly_77  11 United Kingdom
27 Oct 2004 - 9:02 PM

Great Stuff, Love the composition and love the 'how can i say it?' Blackness?? Cool
Click lemonnelly

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sze4j  1056 forum posts Singapore
27 Oct 2004 - 9:51 PM

Like this lots! Very cool and full of character. Yuan and myself had a B/W wedding photo shot exactly the same way (very similar crop too!) and i remembered how cool i thought we look in there... What does Alex think of this? =)

EXCELLENT.

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27 Oct 2004 - 9:59 PM

Thank you both. Soot I think is the word Neal! Sze, Alex loves it, wants a big poster made to put on her wall!

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ellavr  1066 forum posts
27 Oct 2004 - 10:08 PM

I cant say anything else K. I am not surprised that Alex loves it, it is a fabulous iamge, the crop is really fab!! Click

Ella

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27 Oct 2004 - 10:27 PM

Thanks (again!) Ella, I do appreciate your thoughts. K.

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28 Oct 2004 - 10:14 AM

Blimey that is supurb. click

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28 Oct 2004 - 10:28 AM

Thanks Chris. K.

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rosie42  10 Australia
28 Oct 2004 - 10:57 AM

Love it - congratulations on a wonderful portrait. Terrific crop, pose and composition. *click*
Susie :o)

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28 Oct 2004 - 11:03 AM

Thank you Susie. K.

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soupee  949 forum posts
28 Oct 2004 - 11:45 AM

This is excellent. The crop works really well and the lighting shows off her beautiful hair. click.
Sue

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VICTORHABBICK
28 Oct 2004 - 12:48 PM

Grabing a quick break K and what a shot she looks stunning and older than her age. Everything looks great to me from lighting to crop.


Luv Victor

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28 Oct 2004 - 1:00 PM

Thank you both so much. K.

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28 Oct 2004 - 4:42 PM

Can only echo everything above, K. The crop, composition and high contrast work so well with this. Brilliant.
Steve

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28 Oct 2004 - 9:04 PM

Its a stunning image K and she deserves her poster for being such a superb model.

Jeanie

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teena40
teena40  1066 forum posts
28 Oct 2004 - 9:06 PM

WOW K you have a budding model here,she is so photogenic, and I realy like the darkness of the photo, top class work.
Regards
Teena*

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28 Oct 2004 - 9:17 PM

Thank you Steve, Jeanie (how are you??) and Teena, she does love this, she thinks she's Avril Lavigne!

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yuki
yuki  10
1 Nov 2004 - 5:33 AM

i think there is nothing wrong here, it is just perfect! a beautiful picture
Yuki

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1 Nov 2004 - 10:20 AM

Thank you Yuki. K.

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Badger
Badger  124736 forum posts United Kingdom20 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2004 - 8:58 PM

Excellent portrait, she looks at least ten years older and mature with it.
Is she this serious all the time or is it just for this shot?
Matt

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1 Nov 2004 - 9:44 PM

Oh dear hope she doesnt! She is actually mad as a hatter and 70% (Kevin stage Wink ) actually laughing but because her teeth are wonky she really doesnt like anything I take with her smiling. Thanks Matt. K.

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david j. green
3 Nov 2004 - 2:35 PM

A superb striking portrait, your lighting is excellent, and I like the way you cropped this. click

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5 Nov 2004 - 9:48 AM

Thank you David. K.

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claudio the bassist

strange I didn't click this before. Great crop and composition, nice lighting on the hair. Like it

Claudio

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5 Nov 2004 - 2:13 PM

Thanks Claudio. K.

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trudi
trudi  9
6 Nov 2004 - 2:25 PM

Sorry, I missed this, superb.

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jadegreen
jadegreen  9
9 Nov 2004 - 3:51 AM

wow...award winning photography here

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9 Nov 2004 - 4:59 AM

Thank you both. K.

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54 luca
54 luca  10 Wales
9 Nov 2004 - 11:54 AM

I can't believe how young she is -- she looks like a teenager. Very good capture - Like the B/W it certainly adds to the composition.
Excellent.

Richard

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PeeGee
PeeGee  9
10 Nov 2004 - 8:19 AM

Nice work.

PG.

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11 Nov 2004 - 6:39 AM

Thank you both. K.

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ajtorres e2 Member 10ajtorres vcard Argentina
12 Nov 2004 - 6:44 AM

Great portrait and composition. I hope my daughter ever stays still. Click. Alejandro.

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a11sus  11568 forum posts Northern Ireland
13 Nov 2004 - 1:05 PM

Good enough for 68 clicks!

Thanks as always for your support and encouragement K!

Appreciate it.
Susan

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notsam
notsam  10
14 Nov 2004 - 10:49 AM

wow, amazing picture

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15 Nov 2004 - 5:41 AM

Thank you all so much, Susan, no worries glad to help. K.

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inkapinka  10 United Kingdom
15 Dec 2004 - 10:25 AM

It's the focus, that I'm nagging about again; although - it's somehow quite "Mystic" like this, more like a ghost!! Still like it,
Inki

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GeoffS
GeoffS  9117 forum posts
15 Dec 2004 - 3:26 PM

K

This is IMHO is a fabulous portrait the model has great attitude and hair. The tonal range is excellent - maybe I'm photographing the wrong type of birds!

Kind Regards

GeoffS
www.geoffsimpson.co.uk

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23 Mar 2005 - 2:25 PM

My sincerest apologies, I dont click the notify button and I've just seen your comments, thank you both so very much. K.

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janine_w
janine_w  1030 forum posts
30 Apr 2005 - 5:27 AM

Breathtaking.

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ozimax
ozimax  10
4 May 2005 - 5:51 AM

Some amazing stuff in your portfolio K ("Kellogg"??) This is a wonderful portrait, Max

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lisaroberts
23 Jun 2005 - 12:42 PM

Great image K - love the light in her hair - 8..?! My son is 9 and it looks like she'd have him for breakfast!!
Lisa
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24 Jun 2005 - 2:56 AM

lol@Lisa! She's a right treasure this one, caring, funny a right ray of light. I need to try and capture that spirit one day. Thanks all for comments on this, much appreciated. K. (and no not Kellogg LOL! )

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