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For Shane, I wasnt totally convinced about the selective colour either. Apologies to those who commented on earlier upload.

Camera:Pentax *ist D
Title:Lights, camera
Username:answersonapostcard answersonapostcard
Uploaded:14 Oct 2004 - 7:25 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Portrait, Toffee apple
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answersonapostcard
answersonapostcard (Site Moderator)
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:28 AM
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Forgot to say, bribed with a toffee apple for practice, nothing more nothing less. Thats why the title is as is, I got it right for a change and only had to do one adjustment in Photoshop otherwise straight out of the camera.

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sybilla
14 Oct 2004 - 7:31 AM
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This is wonderful, the eyes, the toffee apple, the capture, the colours, the ideas, the composition......need I go on!

CLare

sbphoto
14 Oct 2004 - 7:32 AM
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I like the composition on this. Looks like he is really enjoying the apple , and it does look juicy.
SB

john64
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:39 AM
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Looks like bribary works K. I'll have to try it with my wife and a G&T !!!
Click. JC

john64
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:39 AM
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Ps. Hope you're feeling better today K.

's lovely, K. Another example of excellent child portraiture Smile

martinduke
14 Oct 2004 - 7:41 AM
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Excellent shot - just love the expression - Sorry its next to my Duck's arse pic in the gallery. A flower would have been better next to your pic.
Great work
Click from me
Martin

shane
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:45 AM
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Oh K

Made me feel bad now!

This lovely

top stuff

click

shane

bikemad
14 Oct 2004 - 7:52 AM
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Looks like he is enjoying that.Great photo.click

keithh
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:54 AM
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Novemberingly good.
Bonfirely good.
and Appletastic

Lovely clear shot and very topical!
Jude

ardbeg77
14 Oct 2004 - 8:52 AM
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Great angle and crop, K - top work. Hope you're feeling better today.
Steve

Oh wow - what a brilliant portrait K - such gorgeous eyes! MMmmmm love those toffee apples too Wink
Linda x

sze4j
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14 Oct 2004 - 8:59 AM
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Morning K! Hmmm....the eyes are really gorgeous, but that is only when i cover the toffee apple. 'Cos I currently found the red on the toffee apple too distracting that it really distracts me away from his lovely face/eyes. So, if your intention was to show off his eyes/face as a portrait shot, it doesn't quite work for me.

BUT since your category was "Close-up", i can certainly imagine this as a great advert image for toffee apples (cos that was what caught my attention)...and if so, it works! [His eyes seemed to say that the toffee apple was "heavenly"...]

Just my personal opinions... =)

Click. =)

answersonapostcard
answersonapostcard (Site Moderator)
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:05 AM
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Thanks everyone. Bit more explaination I think. This was just a test shot to get camera and lighting correct. My portraits have been lacking quality and sharpness as I struggled with the technical aspects of it. Having to sit and rescue an image in photoshop frustrated and annoyed me, I wanted to get this right so I could take things further. Last nights attempt was purely practice and I had to bribe Ryan with a toffee apple, he sat for 15 mins and I reeled off 122 pictures, only 4 were of duff quality. I changed lighting, camera settings all in those 15 mins and got some of the technically best to date. Now all I have to do is put the creative and the technical together. Thanks again.

tiptoe
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:07 AM
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Got yourself a heartbreaker there K.
M♥

johnjohn01
14 Oct 2004 - 9:13 AM
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Good angle to this fine portrait.

sze4j
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:13 AM
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wow, K....really admire your tenacity and perseverance in pursuing a great shot!! Go, go, girl!!
*salute* =)

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:19 AM
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Thanks all. Sze it was highly hilarious, wish I could put a montage together, I was almost crying with laughter at one point. K.

bikemad
14 Oct 2004 - 9:23 AM
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I bet you had a great laugh-kids are wicked fun to photograph.

sze4j
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:23 AM
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u should indeed try to put a montage together (when u have the time)...the subject matter has lots of potential for a montage! =)

akh
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14 Oct 2004 - 9:35 AM
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Like this although not a big fan of toffee apples myself.
Tony

looks yummy

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 10:29 AM
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Thanks all. K.

Love the picture. I'm sure he enjoyed the session too with that treat Smile

funkeldink
14 Oct 2004 - 11:07 AM
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mmmmmmmmm ..... munchies .... nice tooth rotting shot ... lovely

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 11:16 AM
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Thanks Sara and Fred. K.

helena
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14 Oct 2004 - 11:21 AM
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Beautiful K. thank you for always commenting on my images, very grateful! Tara x

Lovely portrait, K. Haven't had a toffee apple for years! Click

Jules

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 12:21 PM
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Thank you both. K.

bayliss444
14 Oct 2004 - 12:24 PM
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Great image, click Brian

stevieb
14 Oct 2004 - 12:51 PM
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Bribing young children with sweeties now K...that's terrible.

Good colour. Hate toffee apples, make face all sticky, break teeth, and make yer jaw ache. But, I suppose that's the fun of it all Smile
Stick..errr I mean click.
Steve

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 1:02 PM
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lol I know, bad mum but it was so funny.

wow..this is great!-well done...
Lizzie

stevieb
14 Oct 2004 - 1:06 PM
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Twigs: (I'll bet ya it don't K. A virtual pint of Guinness in the EPZ pub is the bet.)

panda
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14 Oct 2004 - 1:15 PM
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Just perfect. Some test shot!!
Don't you always get the best shots when you are not really trying. Love it

Phil

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 1:25 PM
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Thank you. K.

mattmatic
14 Oct 2004 - 1:41 PM
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Crunchy sharp shot Smile
Glad you're getting the technical aspects together. Go for it!!
Matt :click:

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 1:45 PM
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Thanks Matt, I know the composition doesnt work but so chuffed for getting it right at last. K.

gemm
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14 Oct 2004 - 1:47 PM
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Great portrait! I love the lighting, and sharpness is spot on, as well as the colours. I think this is a quality shot.

mattmatic
14 Oct 2004 - 1:57 PM
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Out of interest, what have you changed to get the result?
(Still Portaflash & brolley, black backdrop?)
Matt

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 2:04 PM
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Thanks Gemm. Matt positioning of the lights helped and dont know why but they wouldnt sync with manual on the camera before but they did last night which meant I could manually set the camera, worked brilliantly. Tried it with a white background too but I need to make a few adjustments to get that to work as well, too reflective I think.

mattmatic
14 Oct 2004 - 2:21 PM
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Aaah! K, try these tutorial links on this site:
Studio Lighting on a budget
Studio Lighting Advice Part 3
Studio Lighting Advice Part 4

(All very useful Wink
Matt

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 2:22 PM
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Thanks Matt. K.

mattmatic
14 Oct 2004 - 2:29 PM
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Oh yes, just to mention, the *ist-D can do some odd things with auto flash especially in its P-TTL mode... I've not got to the bottom of it all, but have found that manual flash will give you much more consistency. Some subjects will come out perfect, others about 2 f-stops underexposed.

(If you don't have a flash meter, just guess and take test shots. e.g. use 1/125s at f11 and adjust the aperture depending on the histogram. Once you've got it right, you shouldn't need to worry too much more.)

Have fun, and do let us know how you get on Wink
Matt

Ade_Osman
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14 Oct 2004 - 2:35 PM
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Well up to your usual standard K,.....regards....Ade

Excellent.
Eddie.

agmcbride
14 Oct 2004 - 3:10 PM
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Just looking at your portfolio, you take the most perfect portraits,well done

Alistair

old timer
14 Oct 2004 - 6:07 PM
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Superb shot, K.
Jim

tull
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14 Oct 2004 - 6:24 PM
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Amazing portrait K. Excellent colour and detail.

Mark.

nigelsharman
14 Oct 2004 - 7:17 PM
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Great portrait although I think I would prefer eye contact but then again perhaps you have one..wish I was still getting bribed to have my photo taken!!

Regards Nigel.

kit-monster
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:32 PM
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You really are very good at these. Love the pose and the lighting - especially the lighting. Excellent shot K,

Edward

Tonyd3
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14 Oct 2004 - 7:55 PM
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Great Lighting K love the image

gary900r
14 Oct 2004 - 8:37 PM
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Great shot.

Gary

andytvcams
14 Oct 2004 - 8:39 PM
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Another stunning portrait,love the angle.

Andy...

answersonapostcard
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14 Oct 2004 - 8:42 PM
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Thanks all so very much. K.

john short
14 Oct 2004 - 9:55 PM
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A great addition to a very good portfolio.

KathyW
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14 Oct 2004 - 10:54 PM
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Great shot, I can really taste that toffee apple...

U4eA
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14 Oct 2004 - 11:11 PM
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Nice natural portrait K...the lighting works very well. And I like your craetive choice of angle as normal. (\/)

stevieb
14 Oct 2004 - 11:11 PM
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Damn you woman...41. I've left a virtual pint of Guinness for ya. I concede. Smile

bassan
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15 Oct 2004 - 5:31 AM
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Very good indeed

lobsterboy
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15 Oct 2004 - 8:10 AM
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Fine work indeed. clcik.

darrinj
15 Oct 2004 - 8:26 AM
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This is fantastic on so many levels, the dreamy look, totally absorbed by the toffee apple, the vibrant colours and the contrast against the background make this just soooooo good!. Click

answersonapostcard
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15 Oct 2004 - 9:25 AM
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Thanks all so much everyone. Steve thanks for the beer, enjoy your hat Wink K.

Hi K - excellent - glad to hear you feel you're beginning to crack it - certainly looks like it here Smile - the angle of light is spot on

Click -

an interesting point here and I run into it as well - is that the light has caught his hair parallel to his right cheek - it's a little distracting - creating a blur effect ??

I think in studio work which by definition is more formal - these little things become more significant - and I, more and more as I progress (ho! ho!), start trying to anticipate them

Cheers

Dave

answersonapostcard
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15 Oct 2004 - 4:03 PM
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Thanks Dave, yes I hadnt noticed that before, attention to detail I can see I'm going to have to attend to. K.

ade_mcfade
16 Oct 2004 - 11:14 AM
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takes me back to bonfire nights when I was his age!

click for the nostalgia.... and the top photo of course

answersonapostcard
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16 Oct 2004 - 11:22 AM
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Thank you. K.

megamuff8
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21 Oct 2004 - 2:45 AM
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I Luv Candy Apples and this shot makes it look Delicious! Big Click!
I'm starved, think I'll order a Pizza...hee hee!
Have a great day,
Suzan Smile

answersonapostcard
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21 Oct 2004 - 8:58 AM
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Thank you Suzan. K.

oldham
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2 Nov 2004 - 12:59 AM
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An excellent composed image well captured lovely expression and gusto at eating the toffee apple all portrayed in your wonderful image well done

answersonapostcard
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2 Nov 2004 - 2:42 PM
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Thank you. K.

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