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A great expression and vibrant colours make this a striking image but I personally think the crop is too loose. The blank space above his head is not needed, cropping in tight to the cap will put the eyes nearer the third and make the portrait more intimate. Personally I prefer 5 X 4 ratio for headshots as it concentrates the image more on the face.
I have uploaded a exampleof what I mean.

Andrew.