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Still the picture of burning tire at demonstration. This one I hope better than my upload before, because the background on here included demonstran and there are banner too, so the nuance is out.

Brand:Samsung
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 Apr 2012 - 10:33 AM
Focal Length:2.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.6
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/351sec
ISO:50
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:No Flash
Title:At Demonstration 2
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:2 May 2012 - 5:33 AM
Tags:Photo journalism
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1578 Constructive Critique Points
3 May 2012 - 11:39 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a lot better, Muhamad, very much like the picture that I was suggesting when commenting on your last upload.
I think the image might benefit from a crop to the right side, almost up to the red podium. The smoke is covering most of the action on that side, and the crop would keep the people who are not covered by smoke on the right, showing what is happening and balancing the image better.
Also, I would have preferred it if you had raised your camera little at the time of shooting, so that there was a bit of space above the heads of those people on the podium. You would still have had plenty of space at the bottom.

I have responded to your recent forum topic about the Critique Gallery.
I hope you understand my explanation.

Pamela.

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
4 May 2012 - 1:50 PM

Thank you Pam, yes I understand your explaination

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