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Feel free to comment, this is where the car come in to the place of demonstration followed by people behind the car.

Brand:Samsung
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 Apr 2012 - 9:25 AM
Focal Length:2.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.6
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
ISO:50
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:No Flash
Title:At Demonstration 3
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:5 May 2012 - 3:55 AM
Tags:Photo journalism
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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2012 - 10:48 AM

it's about province separation Frank. yes i used camera phone and you are right i too feel this was too dark. i tried to adjust the color, the contrast and add backlight effect using photoscape but as you said maybe this scene out from cappabilty the camera.

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2012 - 12:36 PM

This is a difficult shot to take because of the sky behind the protesters. However, it's very common for people to take photos of friends in such lighting conditions so it looks like your camera phone knows how to deal with it. As a result, the exposure seems pretty good, to me though, in software, you could brighten it a bit. It would be nice to see a bit more detail in the shadows and it won't matter much if you blow out the sky to pure white as there's nothing to see there, anyway.

The composition is natural and makes good sense. It might have been nice to shoot from a little farther back so that the protesters' heads were both against the sky, rather than against the tree, as that would give really nice framing.

Dave.

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2012 - 1:41 PM

just tried add a little brightness to the image Using photoscape as you suggest dave. and the image looks better with more detail of people under the shade of trees, unfortunetly the image quality decreasE because of visibility of noise.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom858 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2012 - 7:42 PM

As you have found, dropping density tends to increase noise. Good photojournalism but a bit outside the capability of many camera phones. Adequate journalistic image though.

paul

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 3:55 PM

thank you paul.

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