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Now using S mode, I tried using manual mode but it never find the right exposure. even i tried to raise the iso. the right exposure is on slower shutter speed like 1/40 or 1/30. so i change to s mode and choose 1/200 then the other auto.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Jun 2012 - 7:39 AM
Focal Length:17.1mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/4.6
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Bath Time 2
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:30 Jun 2012 - 3:49 AM
Tags:Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2794 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jun 2012 - 4:10 PM

Much, much better. The Sports mode provided a fast shutter speed and resulted in a very nice shot, - this one is quite good Muhammad. Youve even caught some nice water drops at the top.



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Willie

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mhfore
mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jun 2012 - 4:48 PM

Hi Muhammad,

Not only have you captured some nice water drops as Willie said but I also think you have caught two good facial expressions. I like the composition and the fact that your eyes have to work there way into the darkness to see if there is anything else to discover. That said I feel a tighter crop on the left may also work, there is alot of space on that side with no detail for the eyes to rest.

If you look at the mod you will see that with a slight crop you can end up with the Ladies face on a third along with the child being on another third which should give you a more balanced image.

Take care
Martin

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jun 2012 - 8:47 PM

This is a nice natural image with interesting content. There is slight unsharpness, but not enough to spoil the image. You must control by shutter speed for such shots, as you have done here. You could look at what auto suggests, then set the same values on manual, but shoot several images, varying the aperture - if time and situation allows.

paul

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jul 2012 - 4:44 PM

Thank You Willie, Martin and Paul.

Paul, Yes I had look at the auto setting and tried with manual setting. But sometimes it won't work. the exposure not right. i don't know what happen, but i think it is because the lack of sensor, that's why i used shutter speed mode.

And martin thanks for mod, you are right, i was thinking to crop before but then I am thinking to wait after suggestion from you all.

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