Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

Bath Time

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

At first, This setting (f11,1/30,iso400) is to take picture another subject. but suddenly my son take a bath outside. Still learning the camera. At beginning, when i tried the manual setting, i get the black image Grin because i choose the wrong aperture, f stop and iso. comment and critique welcome

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:25 Jun 2012 - 4:45 PM
Focal Length:37.8mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Bath Time
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:28 Jun 2012 - 12:04 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
VS Mode Rating 100 (0% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:Voting Disabled
Critque wantedCritique Wanted
Modifications wanted Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification)
Awards have been disabled on this photo

Comments

This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10876 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2876 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 3:41 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A new camera Muhamad!

The subject is great. The image is a little blurred as the shutter speed is too slow, so you need a larger aperture, less than f/11 to get a shutter speed of around 1/200th for this shot. Max aperture might have done it with the ISO set as it is.

The 35mm equivalent focal length youve used is approximately 37.8mm X 5, so nearly 200mm, so the shutter speed is 1/focal length at 35mm, = 1/200.

Try it and see how your shot can improve.



Regards



Willie

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 3:45 AM

Thank you willie. i"ll try it. Smile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

Tosh4photos
28 Jun 2012 - 4:26 AM

although I agree with Willie it is still a nice picture even with the blurr

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 5:39 AM

thank you tosh. still learning the right setting. Smile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom855 Constructive Critique Points
29 Jun 2012 - 8:22 AM

Willie is spot on. Your settings need some adjustment. Well composed image - just needs that sharpness.

Paul

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
29 Jun 2012 - 12:35 PM

thank you paul. still waiting my son take a bath outside again Smile

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.