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I hope there were something in the river like boat or fisherman. But none of them present. So, i hope the pillar giving something interest. Comment and critique welcome

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Oct 2012 - 4:56 PM
Focal Length:37.8mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Cimanuk River
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:19 Oct 2012 - 10:25 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 11:45 AM

Your initial self-assessment is very good, just that bit of focal point required.

The vignetting is strange unless your lens hood is a little too long for the lens in use.

I have uploaded a mod where I have changed the format a little and have brighteend it up a bit and removed a lot of noise, as well as cloning out the vignetting.

Frank

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2012 - 4:23 PM

You have made your own comment. There is no real composition and you absolutely needed that subject on the bottom right third.

Paul

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Oct 2012 - 1:19 AM

Thank you Frank, Paul.

The vignet is showing itself. I do not use lens hood but i took the image under the shade of tree. And the mod is briliant the color more vibrant, i like it. somehow my eyes can not see as you all. Grin i even can not see the noise, i hope, i do not have to wait until 10 years to have a vision like you all Wink

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