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I like when the light, fall in to ricefield, beautiful. The unedit a little dark, so raise the exposure and adjust the brightness on photoscape. Any comment and critique welcome.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:9 Dec 2012 - 6:22 AM
Focal Length:5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/6.4
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Morning at Ricefield
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:15 Dec 2012 - 5:58 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
15 Dec 2012 - 6:13 AM

This is a beautiful photo !! very well taken and presented Smile

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paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom859 Constructive Critique Points
15 Dec 2012 - 8:00 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The composition is very nice but the grossly over bright sun light is too much. You needed much less exposure, not brightening, but better, shoot when the frontal lighting was rather less intense.

Paul

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
15 Dec 2012 - 9:21 AM

Good subject matter only spoiled by the rather too bright back lighting. Paul's advice in this regard is excellent.
An interesting composition for us westerners, nicely done.

FRank

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banehawi Critique Team 10901 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2896 Constructive Critique Points
15 Dec 2012 - 3:02 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its a nice scene Muhamad. I like the rays of the Sun.

The original was dark because you shot into the Sun of course. A little brightening of the lower 2/3 would be good, - just a little less than you did, so to retain some shadows, but leave the upper, very bright part with no extra brightening.

Ive uploaded a quick mod to show what I mean.


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Willie

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