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I want to enter photo competition that presented by powerhouse museum Sydney Australia on mobilephones category. The deadline is 29 june 2012. So still there is time if you want too.

The judging are on composition, technique, content, creativity, and experimental approach. The image composition is ok, i guess. But i'm not sure about the others. So any comment and critique welcome. and any any idea for the title.... Smile thank you inadvance...

And the reason i change to black and white because the colour is dull and i thing it will give more impact in black and white.

Brand:Samsung
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 May 2012 - 10:46 AM
Focal Length:2.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.6
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/1310sec
ISO:50
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:No Flash
Title:Railway
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:3 Jun 2012 - 6:18 AM
Tags:Transport
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2012 - 9:07 AM

Reasonable quality from a phone, but a little too contrasty. The content does nothing for me at all I fear - composition is OK, but the main subject is a post with a number on it. I think colour might be better.

Paul

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2012 - 10:56 AM

i guess you are right about the content Paul. truely i am difficult to find interesting subject. the competition itself about train, well thank you for your comment. i will find another subject.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10818 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2820 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2012 - 4:49 PM

The title should be "Mile 9"



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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8754 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1587 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2012 - 5:21 PM

Is this railway line in use, Muhamad?
If so, you could wait for a train to come by and use the rails as a lead-in.
You say the competition is about trains and, if the line is not in use, perhaps you could reconsider your composition so that you don't include so many rocks and grass. You could use the line to run from the bottom of your frame into the distance.
Whatever the white thing is on the far side of the track, it is doing nothing for your image.
I do, however, think you have used the numbered post to good effect and, in the absence of any other interesting main element, it will probably have to do.
Pamela.

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arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2012 - 7:21 PM

@willie: you are right. but i prefer to use "Km 9" than "Miles 9" because we in indonesia not using miles except in the sea.

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2012 - 7:26 PM

@pam: the track still in use. this the main track in java, Pam. i will try to include the train. and thank you for all your comment Smile

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