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I notice burn out or flare? on the on the bottom right. My qustion is why it can happen? any comment and critique on the image are welcome. thank you.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Jul 2012 - 5:46 AM
Focal Length:14.6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/10sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Sunrise 2
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:4 Jul 2012 - 12:21 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 12:47 AM

Nice image. Would like to see the original. The perspective looks too compressed, and the foreground a tad too dark. Hope this makes sense and is taken as constructive?

Kind regards, Matt

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 1:23 AM

Thank you Matt, I upload the original on mod section. It getting bright, but the light not enought to make the foreground standout. but i will try to more light it up. And truely that's made me a little confuse to compose the image.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 3:09 AM

I dont see anything bottom right Muhammad on either shot, - can you explain some more?


Willie

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 4:10 AM

on the edge of brick near the man on the right bottom. the colour like burn out, can you see it willie?

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 2:45 PM

Do you mean the right as we look at the image on the screen?

Or the right of the scene when looking at the camera, which would be the Left of the screen image?

Either way, I dont see anything, nor do I see a man!

W

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arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 3:25 PM

on the right as we seen on the screen. there is bright spot on that part, there is a man behind the brick willie. is this image to dark? i mean, i can see it.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2012 - 9:15 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Muhammad, - I can see a man, but only if I increase shadow detail an abnormal amount, and there is no bright spot. You can confirm this by looking at the histogram, which has most of the data on the left. or dark side, so you dont have to rely on the monitor, as it may be off.

What I think perhaps is that your monitor is displaying the image too brightly.

To do a quick check, scroll down to the bottom of this screen.

See that horizontal bar just above where it says Contact Support? You should be able to see 16 distinctly different squares on the line, from white to black. My guess is that the first 5 or 6 on the left look like a single long bar on your monitor? If so, you need to calibrate it. There are likely some free online sites to help, of you might have a programme called Adobe Gamma in your control panel?




Let me know what you find,


Willie

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arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jul 2012 - 4:52 AM

i checked the histogram and you are right there is no sign over exposure. (on the histogram on camera if there are overexposure, on that spot will blink). i think because most of the scene are dark, the bright area looks dominant to my eyes. do not have adobe gamma but i used quick gamma to calibrate and it helped. thank u very much willie, you are very helpful.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jul 2012 - 6:26 PM

Im glad this worked out! From Ireland to Canada to Indonesia!


Willie

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