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I'm thinking to crop the top with 16:9 ratio to give wide impression. But let's hear your opinion.Unedit, I put in the mod. (I know, I am to push with shooting the scene like this with my phone camera Grin)

Brand:Samsung
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:17 Mar 2012 - 4:08 PM
Focal Length:2.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.6
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/1142sec
ISO:50
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:The Train
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:20 Mar 2012 - 5:26 AM
Tags:Transport
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mhfore
mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
20 Mar 2012 - 8:32 AM

Hi Muhamad,

I know you are using your phone for taking pictures and your doing well with what you have. Could you have found another position where your image would not include the branches over the train? I also think cropping out some of the sky may help as although there is detail you are limited to what you can recover. In the mod I have removed the branches, cropped from the top, leveled using the bridge and lightened the image.

Take care

Martin

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Mar 2012 - 8:46 AM

@martin: Yes Martin, I could found another position for the future shoot. And your mod awesome thank you. I try to leveled using inkscape and photofltre but not as good as you.

@Frank: Yes Frank. I will follow your suggestion.

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