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This is water sport pier in Pangandaran beach west java. It's cloudly after the rain all night. Any comment and modification welcome.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Jan 2013 - 7:38 AM
Focal Length:17.1mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Water Sport Pier
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:4 May 2013 - 6:24 AM
Tags:Black & white, Landscape / travel
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Coast
Coast Critique Team 6933 forum postsCoast vcard United Kingdom290 Constructive Critique Points
4 May 2013 - 8:46 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Overall a pleasant scene. The mono conversion is an interesting choice and I imagine it suited the mood of the day with the dark clouds and rain you were experiencing.

I would lift the levels here to bring out the tones and the mod uploaded should demonstrate the difference for you. The original here is a little flat, overall very grey and little separation between tones. Using the sliders on the levels option you can maximise the range of tones captured by the sensor. A little burning in to darken down the sky to retain the detail in the clouds and the feeling of the weather and a little dodging to bring back some detail in the rocks in the left lower corner as I find this a little too dark a mass and becomes a distraction in the corner of the eye as you view the image.

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
12 May 2013 - 3:59 AM

Thank you Paul , an interesting mod. you are right, mine is flat and there is a little separation between tones.

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