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Ryo...... relaxing.

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Laid back...
Username:arhb arhb
Uploaded:7 Jul 2012 - 7:42 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, Latex fashion
Votes:23
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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jul 2012 - 8:31 PM

Like the light and tones on your model Andrew.
Regards Richard

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tonyguitar
7 Jul 2012 - 8:31 PM

Floating on a cloud. Good imagination at work and the result is refreshing. Good choice in footwear colour. Dark heels would have ruined it. Nicely done. TG

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tomcat
tomcat e2 Member 85835 forum poststomcat vcard United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jul 2012 - 9:11 PM

Haven't a clue how you achieved this, but it certainly works

Adrian

Last Modified By tomcat at 7 Jul 2012 - 9:11 PM

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72123 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom67 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jul 2012 - 11:17 PM

Thanks guys.

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JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53513 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jul 2012 - 2:21 PM

Lovely composite, i do like the way the first tile helps 'ground' her foot. I wonder if you might liquidfy her hair a bit to make it longer and seem less in a straight line?

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72123 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom67 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jul 2012 - 2:31 PM


Quote: I wonder if you might liquidfy her hair a bit to make it longer and seem less in a straight line?

I was thinking about doing some more work with her hair Stuart, but go to a point when I wanted some general feedback - hence the upload, before proceeding, so thanks for the input Smile

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81096 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2012 - 8:52 PM

Pretty good mate.

She well extracted , so perhaps either "ground" her to the floor with a little more top down shadow , or (imho) whack her on a completely different scene , like erm , those levitation ones Smile

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72123 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom67 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2012 - 10:01 PM


Quote: Pretty good mate.

She well extracted , so perhaps either "ground" her to the floor with a little more top down shadow , or (imho) whack her on a completely different scene , like erm , those levitation ones Smile

You mean more than what is there?
I used the actual shadows from the original image - remember both shoes are tilted - 1 forward and one back...

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81096 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2012 - 10:18 PM

Yeh ,

Sculpt her whole body into the scene , not just the shoes.

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