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Another IR shot in the old graveyard at Blackford Kirk. 20secs@f11 R72 IR filter.

Camera:Olympus E-520
Lens:9-18mm @ 9 (18,135=)
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Blackford Kirkyard
Username:Artistwally Artistwally
Uploaded:9 May 2009 - 5:56 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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timparkin
timparkin  827 forum posts United Kingdom
9 May 2009 - 8:39 AM

I opened this hoping to like it as the thumbnail worked well but I have a problem with the foreground. I gravestone at the front is sitting at too acute an angle and it *feels* uncomfortable to the eye (that may have been your intention though). I think I would have moved back, to the right and down slightly to nestle the front gravestone up into the gap between it and the other stones (reducing the large gap above and to the left of it). This would have allowed you to create some space between the bottom of the stone and the edge of the frame as well, allowing the front stone to become more of a feature (at the moment it doesn't seem to know if it's the focus of the picture or not - if that makes sense)

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x_posure  5 Australia
12 May 2009 - 12:29 PM

This is also wonderful, you have some great photos
Well done

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intophoto
intophoto  5 Scotland
3 Jun 2009 - 8:33 AM


Quote: I opened this hoping to like it as the thumbnail worked well but I have a problem with the foreground. I gravestone at the front is sitting at too acute an angle and it *feels* uncomfortable to the eye (that may have been your intention though). I think I would have moved back, to the right and down slightly to nestle the front gravestone up into the gap between it and the other stones (reducing the large gap above and to the left of it). This would have allowed you to create some space between the bottom of the stone and the edge of the frame as well, allowing the front stone to become more of a feature (at the moment it doesn't seem to know if it's the focus of the picture or not - if that makes sense)

Well i have to disagree with this chap.......this is a superb shot, i love in IR looks spooky
Kind regards Sarah

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