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expressing city space in chaotic way with blending with snow pasion

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:EF16-35mm f/2.8L II USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Nov 2011 - 9:51 PM
Focal Length:16mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:untitled
Username:artrbn artrbn
Uploaded:20 Dec 2012 - 4:04 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel
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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2012 - 4:49 PM

The potential is great, but I'm afraid I find it very difficult to loo at as presented. I am immediately trying to tilt my head to the right - a lot. That is a sure sign the composition is wrong for the subject. More conventional angle needed for me.

paul

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2012 - 5:52 PM

I really like this. The thumbnail image suggested a mechanical arrangement with pipes, etc so I was quite surprised when I opened it.

I can see the point about wanting to turn your head, but I dont feel the urge so much. It can benefit with more contrast I think, and also looks very good as a duo tone, - quite graphic. And, a surprise again for me, it looks very good rotated 90 degrees CCW. Ive loaded 3 mods,

Hope this helps,


Regards


Willie

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pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2012 - 6:42 PM

I had no idea what it was at first, Rooby, but it came to me when I saw the third modification. So only now can I look at your image and appreciate it. I therefore feel that the change of format is a good idea.
Pamela.

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72116 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom67 Constructive Critique Points
22 Dec 2012 - 8:31 AM

I like the landscape format, because it adds an abstract quality to the image.

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artrbn  1 Iran, Islamic Republic of
23 Dec 2012 - 8:25 PM

I am thankful to you for your critics, i really found new way of edition in regarding of these type of photos

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