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A picture I took of my son at the weekend while we were on the North York Moors Railway.

Needless to say he enjoyed himself.

Camera:Canon EOS350D
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:My Son
Username:ascott1977 ascott1977
Uploaded:13 May 2008 - 9:24 PM
Tags:Child, Close up, Close-up / macro, Face, Finger, General, Portraits / people, Train
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Rylands
Rylands  6 United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
13 May 2008 - 9:46 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A priceless image superbly captured
Ray

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pennyspike
pennyspike  102068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
13 May 2008 - 9:50 PM

A lovely animated picture of your son but I would like to see it without that bright light above his head. The reflection of his finger adds to it. Try scrolling down and see what a difference it makes. The other lighlight to the right really needs toning down too.
It looks as if he's going to need an anorak before he gets much olderSmileSmileSmile

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ascott1977
13 May 2008 - 9:55 PM

Cheers pennyspike. Now you mention it I agree. What do you mean by scrolling down. Am I been stupid!

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pennyspike
pennyspike  102068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
13 May 2008 - 10:29 PM

Hello I'm backSmile
Just bring the bluebar on the right down so it cuts off the top of the picture off just at the top of his head. This does two things, it brings the eyes more onto the thirds and also cuts off the bright spot.
You might prefer to just tone it down a little if you want to keep the context of the carriage.
While I'm back I now notice that the black border is a little heavy for the little lad.
Penny

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