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Grandma's back!
And in comparison to yesterday's image she's all smiles Smile

I think my grandmother is certainly the strong noble woman I hoped to portray in yesterday's image, but most of the time she is simply this dear warm person you're seeing in this image. She's actually rather camera shy, but there's no chance she'll say "no" to her granddaughter Tongue

I'll appreciate you comments on this one plz.

Have a great week!
Ayelet

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Title:Granny says Relax
Username:Ayelet_A Ayelet_A
Uploaded:21 Feb 2010 - 9:44 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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maroondah
maroondah (e2 Member)
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21 Feb 2010 - 9:57 PM
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Images like these are what life and memories are all about. Beautifully done.
Gerry

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ptitcendrier
21 Feb 2010 - 10:00 PM
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love the tones and the diffuse light, but the window seems to grab my attention more than the old lady and the table set... still, nice, really nice.

tigertimb
21 Feb 2010 - 10:00 PM
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Beautiful shot Ayelet; a great contrast between the wild weather through the window and the cosy setting with the candles, wooden table and wine. And a warm smile from your gradmother portraying the affection between you
Tim

mrswoolybill
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21 Feb 2010 - 10:06 PM
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I love her. I love everything here. Warm and glowing.
Moira

Mynett
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21 Feb 2010 - 10:28 PM
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beautifully captured

Linda

dorricottpix_photography
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21 Feb 2010 - 10:36 PM
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Again you have chosen your composition beautifully. A fine and charming study.

Bruce

metro074
metro074 (e2 Member)
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21 Feb 2010 - 11:22 PM
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A beautifuly lit composition. Love the setting. Well done
Carol

gary_d
gary_d (e2 Member)
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21 Feb 2010 - 11:55 PM
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Thats better a happy smiley face much prefer this one. - gary

CarolG
CarolG (e2 Member)
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22 Feb 2010 - 5:56 AM
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A lovely image, Ayelet, good light. Carol

johnjones
22 Feb 2010 - 1:11 PM
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great shot with the use of natual light
jj

FeatherFriend
FeatherFriend (e2 Member)
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22 Feb 2010 - 1:46 PM
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A lovely comp Ayelet,
Geoff.

cassiecat
22 Feb 2010 - 5:11 PM
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the setting looks warm and inviting, think it would suit a square crop.lesley

RockArea
RockArea (e2 Member)
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22 Feb 2010 - 6:25 PM
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Oh yes, a very different image from yesterday's with all the eye contact and warmth you could want. An interesting comparison, well done.

David

ellenib
ellenib (e2 Member)
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22 Feb 2010 - 6:47 PM
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Look like your heart had been out to take pictures again you certainly know how to put the warmth into an image.

Niels

Roly
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22 Feb 2010 - 9:43 PM
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Super well composed portrait Ayelet.One for the wall I reckon.

bliba
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23 Feb 2010 - 1:00 AM
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Beautifully done

excellent Buddie
Dennis

raygregson
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24 Feb 2010 - 10:05 AM
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superb candid image ayelet.ray

DRicherby
24 Feb 2010 - 8:38 PM
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The love you and your grandmother feel for each other is so obvious in this shot.

The focus looks a bit soft but I think that actually enhances the photograph, especially in the appearance of the candle flames. The composition seems a bit odd to me, though. Shooting portrait means that your grandmother is leaning in from outside the frame and the left-most candle is hard against the other side. It also puts a lot of bright window in the photograph, which draws a lot of attention. Was there any reason you didn't go for a landscape orientation? That would seem more natural, as long as it didn't bring anything unwanted into the image.

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rontear
rontear (e2 Member)
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24 Feb 2010 - 11:27 PM
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Hi Ayelet,
Thank you for your most appreciated comments on the Macaque series. Japan was fascinting and an experience ! Ryokan's and fish !
A time of our lives, many thanks for giving us an earlier insight.
Ron.

Ayelet_A
27 Feb 2010 - 11:17 PM
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Thanks everyone, I'm sure grandma would be delighted for such responses Smile

Dave, thanks for the critique. I usually prefer to shoot in portrait crop, can't really explain why I find it more appealing usually in the composition than landscape crop.
In this specific image the subject wasn't necessarily a portrait of my grandmother but more of the entire room and atmosphere. I felt she has a strong enough personality to shine through even if not placed in the center of the image. I also really liked the window, with the wooden frame and delicate drapes. The light was the crucial choice I think for me to choose this orientation, and I felt the image was better illuminated using this crop.
If I'm not mistaken (it was almost a year ago) the room was rather small and a nasty fridge was placed on the left which would have shown on a landscape orientation.
After all this being said, both you and Lesley commented on the portrait orientation, so maybe it was just a personal preference, and not necessarily the right one Wink

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