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This is a rework of a previous shot taken last weekend

Comments and critique welcome

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Oct 2012 - 12:00 PM
Focal Length:53mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.6
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Jen - Modified
Username:bailey73 bailey73
Uploaded:3 Nov 2012 - 5:58 PM
Tags:Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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Oleg_Lobzin
Oleg_Lobzin e2 Member 4Oleg_Lobzin vcard Russian Federation
3 Nov 2012 - 7:04 PM

Brilliant mono shot! Amazing model!
Yours faithfully, Oleg.

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DonMc
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3 Nov 2012 - 7:29 PM

Nice work!

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DeSilver
DeSilver e2 Member 7DeSilver vcard England11 Constructive Critique Points
4 Nov 2012 - 9:15 AM

A lovely mono image. Well lit and superbly captured. Smile


David.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
4 Nov 2012 - 3:16 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Nice range of tones in the mono conversion. Its a pity that the end of her foot is missing. I would suggest a little more light on her face, and to address the fact her knees are too close to the top of the frame, just extend the canvas a little.

Loaded a mod to show what I mean,



regards



Willie

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4 Nov 2012 - 3:48 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Darren, just put a surface blur on to blend the skin tones on the head and re sharpened the lips and eyes and a crop, hope its ok.
cheers phil.

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 9:28 AM

Nice shot

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