This is a better image than yesterdays, being a lot sharper.
The lighting to me appears a little too harsh, casting strong shadows on one side of her face. This can be sorted out by placing the fill light where the camera is, and balancing the light to allow better illumination of the face overall, while still maintaining some shadow to provide depth.
There appears to be a colour cast similar to yesterdays shot, seems a little cold overall. Its best to actually measure the colour temp of your lights rather than set to flash, as they may not be what the flash setting is in software. You can do this by taking a test shot with the model holding a grey card, then click on the grey card in RAW conversion with the white balance tool, and use the setting it indicates for all shots.
I would suggest the composition may look better if you crop from the bottom to place her eye on a third, and add a little more space to the right.
Ive loaded a mod with the crop, colour balance a little warmer, shadows reduced.
Hope this is helpful,