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Brand:OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Camera:Olympus E-520
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 Feb 2011 - 1:40 PM
Focal Length:40mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/22.0
Shutter Speed:1/15sec
Exposure Comp:0.264527
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:ESP
Flash:On, Did not fire
Title:Waiting for Summer
Username:beeza410 beeza410
Uploaded:23 Nov 2011 - 12:09 PM
Tags:Architecture, Beach huts, Beachfront, Weymouth
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
23 Nov 2011 - 3:55 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a good image to illustrate the importance of good light when taking a shot Stan, - it just wasnt in your favour. the subject is great, the colours are there, but as Frank says, it looks dull, rather than vibrant. Noting you did wrong, just the light.

Photoshop can improve it, as the mods show, - I didnt clone out the railings, Frank had already done a good job of it.

What I did was increase brightness, contrast and increased colour saturation.



Regards



Willie

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beeza410
beeza410  432 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Nov 2011 - 6:40 PM

Cheers for your mods guys, I prefer the railings in situ as I feel this ads an extra dimension, my opinion only!

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2011 - 5:53 PM

Al that matters ultimately is what you want. However, you will find that in most critical groups and competitions, the railings would have to go I fear. You also need to lift brightness as there is a flatness I assume due to ambient lighting at the time.

You see a lot of beach hut shots. Bright, bright colours.

Paul

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