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When I stop on the road I saw into the grass, a group of people with the fournitures, vehicles, wood, etc in the middle of nowhere. Building their movil house for the season.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Oct 2010 - 2:16 AM
Focal Length:40mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/2500sec
Exposure Comp:+2/3
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:building the house
Username:Bernabedellamattia Bernabedellamattia
Uploaded:5 Apr 2012 - 4:40 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Mongolia rural landscape, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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SueEley
SueEley  8271 forum posts Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2012 - 4:50 PM

This is an interesting scene from a photojournalism point of view. You have included a lot of information. I think it would be stronger as a photo if you had focused on one part of the scene and had someone facing towards the camera (the child in pink would have been good), or at least a face in shot.

Last Modified By SueEley at 5 Apr 2012 - 4:53 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom858 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2012 - 5:16 PM

Interesting. i think there are quite a few images available here, but, if possible rather closer with more detail. That may not be possible of course but I find just a bit too much to look at here.

Paul

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Ade_Osman
Ade_Osman e2 Member 114521 forum postsAde_Osman vcard England36 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2012 - 7:13 PM

It's one of those what if shots.....What if I shot it this way or that, I think this particular image would benefit if converted to mono. It's easy for me to say this now, but I think had it been me I'd have tried to shoot it from a slighter higher and closer perspective.....

Ade

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43436 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom103 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2012 - 7:50 PM

An image full of endless narration, just needs pushing in the right direction, in order that we can read the information before ours, without having to read between the lines or fill in the gaps.

Regards Nathan

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