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In spain a group dancers that I meet in a great trip around Europe, in the harbor they show their colors, their posture, their feelings. I fall in love with this culture.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Aug 2009 - 5:51 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/50sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:maja 2.0
Username:Bernabedellamattia Bernabedellamattia
Uploaded:23 Sep 2012 - 3:33 PM
Tags:Dance, Dress, Harbor, Majas, Portraits / people, Spain
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G3  11 United States2 Constructive Critique Points
23 Sep 2012 - 6:10 PM

The contrast of color and mood makes this a fine photo.

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banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
23 Sep 2012 - 7:27 PM

A really beautiful shot. I can only suggest re framing as in the mod, which involves cropping to make more space on the right and make the image shorter. This brings the front dancer more off centre. I used Photoshop CS6 to fu=ill in the empty space I created on the right. The mod is in an 8 X 10 aspect ratio.


Well done,



regards




Willie

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
24 Sep 2012 - 5:25 PM

Quite an impressive image but i do suspect rather a lot of manipulation? May just be very directional evening sun but looks like you played a bit.

Paul

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Bernabedellamattia

Thanks for your comments! I agree with you Williie
Paul, I only use Lightroom to give contrast and saturation, a bit off colors and some others adjustment but there is not manipulation in this image.
I used external flash light with a soft box 45 degrees, and the sunset just finishing behind.
Thanks!

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