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I had to work quick and squeezed off a couple of shots right inside the hot air ballon.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Lens:Sigma 10-20
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:23 Sep 2011 - 5:25 PM
Focal Length:10mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:Inside
Username:Berniea Berniea
Uploaded:17 Oct 2011 - 9:05 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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paulbroad
18 Oct 2011 - 7:54 AM
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Very effective. Like it. I could ask for my usual figure, but not necessary here.

Paul

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP (Critique Team)
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1551 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom550 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2011 - 12:52 PM
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well i really like this, the colours and the white detail all come together to make a striking abstract.
i think that you may have been able to tighten the composition some by a slight shift in position and placing the circular shape nearer the third and getting a more diagonal relationship between the white logo ad the circle, but hey, wish i had been there.

Phil

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Berniea
18 Oct 2011 - 6:15 PM
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Thanks guys for your comments. I wondered about cropping this image to try and get the circle into more of a thirds position, could it be done and where do you think a crop could improve the image?

pamelajean
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18 Oct 2011 - 7:58 PM
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In answer to your question, Bernie, I have attempted a modification. It involves quite a drastic crop, but I think it's quite effective. Composing with the rule of thirds in mind would obviously have been preferable. The red is very striking, the image is unusual, and I like it a lot just as it is.
Pamela.

NEWMANP
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18 Oct 2011 - 9:20 PM
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thats the one Pamela, i was at work without photoshop.
Phil

Berniea
20 Oct 2011 - 8:09 PM
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Thanks very much Pamela, so much to think about sometimes. But I like what you have done and it does lead the eye in to the centre of the image. I can see from you pf how you have made great use of the thirds rule so thanks again for taking the time to show me and give good advice.

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