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I went to take photo's and i saw a lovely landscape,i hope you like the pic!!!

Camera:KodakZ650
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:first snow
Username:BethanfromEbbw BethanfromEbbw
Uploaded:7 Nov 2008 - 10:13 PM
Tags:Landscape, Landscape / travel, Snow, Wales
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jdenman
jdenman  6 Spain5 Constructive Critique Points
7 Nov 2008 - 10:24 PM

Good landscape, well done.
John

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BethanfromEbbw
7 Nov 2008 - 10:25 PM

thank you

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Pegon
Pegon  978 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
7 Nov 2008 - 10:54 PM

Excellent shot. I like the capture of the low lying clouds rolling over the hills.
Pete.

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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 7834 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom172 Constructive Critique Points
7 Nov 2008 - 11:03 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think this is a very good landscape photo. The lead in from the bottom left lets the eye travel to the mid-ground rocks through to the road beyond. The format is well chosen. It also has excellent atmosphere. Taking photos in potentially bad weather can add something different and exciting to an image, so well done for spotting the opportunity.

I think this needs to be worked in a photoshop type program though. The tonal range looks to be quite narrow and could be helped by using levels. Move the left slider to the main mass of the histogram. This will improve the dark areas. Next, move the right slider to the main mass to improve the lights. Don't go too far with either as you'll get clipped highlights and shadows. That just means you'll lose information in those two areas. You can move the centre slider to adjust the mid-tones. This can enhance the overall feel of the photo.

Use curves to improve the contrast by pushing the straight line graph into a shallow 's' curve.

This is only an opinion.

Alan.

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dweezil
dweezil  6 England
7 Nov 2008 - 11:17 PM

Wow what a stunning shot one to be proud of well done
Craig

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MikefromEbbw
8 Nov 2008 - 7:13 PM

Very well taken and spotted Bethan,great shot!

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BethanfromEbbw

thank you for you comments.
Alan i do not understand what you mean but when i get older i might be able to as i am only 10,

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Alan_Coles
1 Dec 2008 - 7:45 PM

Top quality Bethan, following in your Dad's footsteps nicely - look forward to seeing more from you soon.

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