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How do I follow the success of the first - an amazing response and I thank you all very much indeed, much appreciated.
Tried this one with a tighter crop and conversion, I know what I want but can't achieve it and I can't explain it either - a bit of 'punch' is missing somehow.
Anyway, see what you think and what I could do to improve it!

Camera:Nikon Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Gods Wonderful Railway - take 2
Username:BEVZED BEVZED
Uploaded:7 Jun 2007 - 1:40 PM
Tags:General, Steam, Train, Transport, West somerset railway
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Badgerfred
Badgerfred e2 Member 7Badgerfred vcard Wales
7 Jun 2007 - 1:48 PM

It's an excellent image as it is,
Fred.

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MrsS
MrsS  84527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2007 - 1:49 PM

Oh bu@@er! It's that song again!! Can't help on the technical front tho' Smile

Cheers!

Fran x

..... wanders off into the distance . . . dabba dabba dabba dabba dabba dabba dabba doo!!!

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Badgerfred
Badgerfred e2 Member 7Badgerfred vcard Wales
7 Jun 2007 - 1:59 PM

Hi Beverley
Try lightening slightly using levels, sharpening slightly and clone out the mark on the nose,
Fred.

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michael366
7 Jun 2007 - 2:06 PM

To be honest,there's not a lot more you can do with this.Great photo.

Michael

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jimthistle73
7 Jun 2007 - 2:30 PM

Agree with the above post - great, unusual angle and all round cracking documentary portrait.
Jamie.

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2007 - 4:37 PM

A wonderful image/candid-- No need to do anything with it!

Jennnn

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woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2007 - 5:55 PM

I think this is pretty great as it is. I'm just wondering how an Old Testament Prophet has got himself into this situation!
Bill

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yemtrav
yemtrav e2 Member 8yemtrav vcard England
7 Jun 2007 - 7:18 PM

This is a much stronger shot than the colour version. Excellent.

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GeorgeRusky
7 Jun 2007 - 8:11 PM

Beverley
Top Class B & W picture!
Thank you for your comments
George

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clur
clur  7 United Kingdom
8 Jun 2007 - 6:54 AM

what mark on his nose, i must be blinddddddddddddd

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inkarts
inkarts  1061 forum posts1 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jun 2007 - 2:53 PM

Very well done, super detail. Kind regards John

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dianah
dianah  824474 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jun 2007 - 6:52 PM

Love this shot too but haven't got a preference as they are really totally different..this one is timeless!
Di

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GlynnisFrith
GlynnisFrith e2 Member 7GlynnisFrith vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jun 2007 - 11:17 AM

Like it in Black & white
Glynnis

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annefromleo
2 Jul 2007 - 10:50 PM

This is wonderful, fantastic journal, love it.
deserves more attention IMHO
Anne

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Andree_Borrel
6 Jul 2007 - 10:48 AM

Adds another dimension, excellent

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meadowman
meadowman  7
7 Jul 2007 - 12:30 PM

nearly there! great work..deserves a rc

gary

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