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Recently i tried to take this photo at Bordi beach . Please give your valuable suggestions against it to improve further. The photo has been taken with point and shoot camera.

Brand:Samsung
Camera:Samsung WB600 Check out Samsung NX Generation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 May 2012 - 10:00 AM
Focal Length:4.6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.4
Aperture:f/4.8
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:80
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:at bordi beach
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:1 Jun 2012 - 6:38 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Andysnapper
Andysnapper e2 Member 6100 forum postsAndysnapper vcard England18 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jun 2012 - 6:40 AM

I like it, it looks like an old sepia tinted print.

Andy

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puertouk
puertouk  21072 forum posts United Kingdom17 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jun 2012 - 11:53 AM

The image looks like it has a colour cast to it. I put into Photoshop, removed the yellow cast, which I feel brings the image out with realist colouring. Hope you like it
Stephen

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jun 2012 - 2:58 PM

Its a nice scene BG. I like how you have the three boats in a line, eah one smaller than the other.

I think the light might have been a challenge for the camera. Its quite bright, and the camera has done a decent averaging of the scene.

There is a yellow tone, but this may well be due to the tone the Sun has cast on the scene. It is a little lacking in vibrance, again likely due to the position of the Sun.


It may suit a crop that more like a panorama crop, losing some of the sky, and placing the horizon on a third. Reducing yellow a little makes the sky a more blue colour. but removing it altogether is a mistake, as it looks very much unreal.



Ive loaded a mod to show what I mean,




regards


Willie

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