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I tried to capture the sunrise moment at one of the beaches of India in this way.where there a boat also which was sailed .While taking the photo the atomosphere was dull and Cloudy..So thought of darkness and small oil lamp concept. and took this snap with point and shoot camera.
Please give your valuable suggestions.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ15
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Feb 2012 - 6:42 AM
Focal Length:14.2mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.3
Aperture:f/4.7
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Morning Lamp
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:23 Feb 2012 - 6:13 AM
Tags:Nature, Wildlife / nature
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DRicherby
DRicherby  6269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
23 Feb 2012 - 10:57 AM

I like the idea of using the sun in this way -- it's fun and creative. I think ideally, the sun 'lamp' would be placed right on the bow, rather than just off to one side but I don't see that as a huge problem. I would suggest cropping away some of the sky, though, since there's not a huge amount going on there. Perhaps half of the space above and to the right of the sun, which would put the sun at the intersection of thirds as Frank suggests.

Dave.

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