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This time i tried to capture the center of palm tree early morning .Please give your comments .

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:105.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 100.8 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:18 Dec 2011 - 4:48 PM
Focal Length:105mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:palm
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:31 Dec 2011 - 4:56 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
31 Dec 2011 - 12:31 PM

Well, it's a perfectly good record image, and, as such, there is little to say. Pictorially, the lighting and subject are a bit dull. i would have struggled to know what it was.

paul

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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 8902 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom173 Constructive Critique Points
31 Dec 2011 - 1:41 PM

I think this just needs a little imagination with the processing. It's a good start but needs more to elevate it. There's plenty of detail in the photo so it should be easy to process this how you want. My mods are only a suggestion, it's up to you to play with this until you're happy with it. A high contrast mono, a quad tone, a moody low key or high key shot, turn it into an abstract, all could work for this. Look around the web for ideas on processing styles or possibilities.

Alan.

Last Modified By Paintman at 31 Dec 2011 - 1:43 PM

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8829 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
31 Dec 2011 - 10:14 PM

An attractive closeup of the palm, with good detail and a nice background of palm leaves. In my modification, I cropped so that it was not so central, then adjusted highlights, shadows and levels to brighten it and make the most of the pretty shapes. I also removed or darkened some of the background highlights.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 31 Dec 2011 - 10:16 PM

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