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This is boat sailed at Bordi beach at overcast condition , captured with point and shoot camera.. The sand around the sea is black.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ15
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Mar 2008 - 5:07 PM
Focal Length:47mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.3
Aperture:f/4.9
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:Rest at Bordi beach
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:4 Jun 2012 - 1:05 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10876 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2875 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jun 2012 - 4:43 PM

Hi BG,


I cant tell if you have applied a yellow filter to this shot, or this is how it came from the camera. I will assume, since you didnt mention a filter, that its from the camera.


First, what appears to be the horizon is not quite level, - just a little off; theres too much sky, and it looks better if you crop space from the top and raise the boat; correcting the colour, and sharpening changes the scene quite a bit. Its more "correct" as far as Photoshop is concerned, but only you can judge if its a more accurate representation of what you saw. You can check the mod.

Without colour correction, you need crop, straighten, and sharpen.



regards



Willie

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