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On Sunday , while roaming in a fort, I got this chance to capture Sunlight over a Pillar . Please give your valuable suggestion against the snap

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:105.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 100.8 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:18 Dec 2011 - 3:22 PM
Focal Length:105mm
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Sunlight
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:20 Dec 2011 - 7:48 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61583 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2011 - 12:47 PM

hi,
what you have captured has been done well enough, exposed and composed fine and the shapes are interesting but i think another element is need to complete the image.

its a little like a stage set without an actor. if a figure was popping out from behind the column with something bright like a headscarf caught in the bright shaft of light then you have a winner.

how about looking for something in your files and photoshopping it into the image ?

regards
Phil

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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2011 - 6:51 PM

The sunny wall has good tones, but about half the image is black. Like Phil, I would like to see a figure perhaps, but also some detail in the rest of the wall... It is hard to get detail in dark areas without overexposing the sunny tones you wanted to keep, but maybe combining two or more shots might be the way to go? Or, with raw you might have been able to recover some detail.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
21 Dec 2011 - 8:25 AM

Possibly half a stop less exposure to increase detail in the stone but you do need something to add interest. The shapes are not enough on tere own. A figure also harshly lit?

Paul

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