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Sunrise at Mahabalipuram

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The photo has been taken early morning before sunrise at one of the beaches in India with the help of point and shoot camera. Please give your valuable suggestions

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ15
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Feb 2012 - 6:49 AM
Focal Length:6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.3
Aperture:f/3.7
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Sunrise at Mahabalipuram
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:22 Feb 2012 - 11:19 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom55 Constructive Critique Points
22 Feb 2012 - 11:26 AM

A top image nice tonnes and DOF...

Dave

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mugshotmyk
22 Feb 2012 - 12:02 PM

Have you noticed the horizon slopes away to the right. A modest correction in photoshop and you will have a charming and very well taken image to hang on the wall.

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Ayoob
Ayoob e2 Member 3Ayoob vcard Australia
22 Feb 2012 - 12:05 PM

A cracking shot and very good detail image..........Grin

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Fefe
Fefe e2 Member 2Fefe vcard United Kingdom28 Constructive Critique Points
22 Feb 2012 - 1:01 PM

Good composition, Yes the horizon is a little out, I think the colours and details are lovely but I would give them a bit more saturation, and a bit more cotrast to the sky to get more impact.
Diane

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Fefe
Fefe e2 Member 2Fefe vcard United Kingdom28 Constructive Critique Points
22 Feb 2012 - 1:12 PM

I have done a mod for youSmile
Diane

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
22 Feb 2012 - 3:47 PM

A nice sunrise scene, bg, capturing the children on the shoreline. The sun is nicely placed to the left side with no burnout, so you took advantage of the cloud there.
As the children are the subject, I have done a modification with one third sky and two thirds shore on the vertical. I adjusted levels to get more of a silhouette on the children and a bit more colour throughout, especially in the sky and where the sun hits the water and wet sand. I then selectively sharpened the bottom.
I have done a second modification where I used the burn tool to darken the top of the image, as I felt it looked better balanced.
Pamela.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 22 Feb 2012 - 3:51 PM

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