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One of the many pets. Another attempt at catching movement, sometimes i like this picture, sometimes I don't. should it be sharper? then I think I like thats its not. Theres decision making for you. Anyway please comment. Haven't done any manipulation on it yet.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:AF-S DX VR Zoom-Nikkor 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED [II] Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Apr 2012 - 11:31 AM
Focal Length:135mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/18.0
Shutter Speed:1/25sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Pippa
Username:bgrunes bgrunes
Uploaded:12 Jul 2012 - 6:51 PM
Tags:Pets / captive animals
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2796 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jul 2012 - 7:56 PM

I like it, but with a few tweaks as done in the mod.

I would increase the contrast on the dog, while decreasing the rest; sharpen the dog aggressively, - and you see that the loop on his collar is quite sharp; remove that diagonal light line above the dog; crop to place him/her a little lower. The mod crop is a 10 X 8 aspect ratio. I think it works, great sense of movement, not only side to side, but circular, which is nice.



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Willie

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