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This is the second shot of D from my first shoot.
Thanks to all those that commented on the first picture, both my wife and I are very encouraged.

Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:24-105
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:D 2
Username:big mc big mc
Uploaded:19 Oct 2008 - 11:14 AM
Tags:Flash, Flash / lighting, Glamour, Nude / glamour, Portrait, Portraits / people
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GrahamNobles
19 Oct 2008 - 11:22 AM

Like this one even better, D seems to have relaxed a little more. Very lovely lady.
Graham

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2008 - 11:24 AM

Better image. The expression is more relaxed

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kaybee
kaybee  103772 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2008 - 12:16 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

She looks nice and happy.

Two things I would suggest ........... I would desaturate the blue in the hue/saturation and also clone out the fold lines in the backdrop.

If you can - in future sessions - get more distance between your model and the backdrop and open the lens a couple of stops and pull the backdrop as tight as possible to get it as smooth as you can

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sillygirl
sillygirl  6 Sweden
19 Oct 2008 - 12:18 PM

What a nice realaxed pose, youre doing good. Smile
Marie

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ringyneck
ringyneck  7304 forum posts United Kingdom18 Constructive Critique Points
19 Oct 2008 - 1:19 PM

I prefer the pose of the !st one.Together with the expression of this one and it would be a real winner.
On this one I don't like the pose as it's un-flattering and the right side keeps pulling the eye over there.

Keith

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oneill
oneill  6155 forum posts Ireland
20 Oct 2008 - 1:03 PM

so you both should,,beautiful images,,,

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ginz04
ginz04  10276 forum posts United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
22 Oct 2008 - 5:13 PM

hi = i like the pose but would crop to get rid of legs because they are in foreground pointing towards camera it makes them look big - would suggest you need to iron the back drop better to get rid of creases.

Dont know if you have many lights because if shooting a white bg - you need to get 2 lights firing on bg 3 stops more than forefround to make it go white. Also you need to get your model as far from back drop as possible but at least 6 - 8 feet.

Regards

Ian

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mikesavage
mikesavage  12234 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Oct 2008 - 6:58 PM

Another nice shot - I would have been tempted to point the camera down slightly though. Click!

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sawdust
sawdust  872 forum posts
7 Nov 2008 - 3:05 PM

Yes you are on the right track keep up the work rate.I see the wife is geting more confidant and it shows
All the best Alan

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steveuk
steveuk  5 United Kingdom
30 Dec 2008 - 4:57 PM

Well I would agree with many of the comments here.

In this one she looks lot more confident, so I haop you will be taking more photos soon.

Couple of suggestions:
1. Let her look slightly at angle to the camera, that way she wont be too sub-concious
2. Background is too tame for such a beautiful lady
3. Earing rings look great, add some more jewellry
4. blouse with long sleeves let her down in the photo, short one next time, and needs to be flimsier

And finally good luck!

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pandaphotography

More relaxed pics in this image, but i have to say in your lovely wifes defense, its not easy modelling for a loved one.

I would invest in seamless paper backdrops if you have the space, they make for a cleaner picture, material always looks a bit messy.

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Armakk
Armakk e2 Member 4Armakk vcard United Kingdom
2 Jul 2014 - 7:47 PM

Great shot well done to you both... SmileSmileSmile

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