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From a long shoot at the weekend this is only the second time my wife has posed following earlier encouragment from this site.
We are both trying to develop our techniques and welcome constructive feedback
Thanks for all those that have commented in the past and for taking the time to view this image
wonderful shot but i think your wife looks a bit uncomfortable. other than that it's a great shot
I think its a nice soft image, however the white balance just don't look right for some reason.
The skin tone looks a little orange, however the exposure is not too bright.
Agree with above about white balance but like the pose and overall feel of the shot. Well done.
Like the pose. It would be interesting to see how the pose looks if the model stayed in the same position and you took the shot from an lower and higher angles.
Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence.
I like the pose, composition and lighting.
Not sure about the comments re white balance cos on my monitor it looks OK. But then is my monitor set up correctly ???
Best wishes to you both
Good on the two of you.
It is pretty simple but works for me.
wow......what a fantastic photo, right proportions and an excellent and sexy model. Looking at all your photos so far, she looks more relaxed and hence the poses are so erotic without revealing too much...
This one works well. A very relaxed expression which draws you in.
Quote: Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence. alfieB
Have to agree with Alfie. A very very lucky chap to have your wife also be your model. Tell her we all look forward to seeing her grow even more in confidence as your sessions progress.
They keep geting better love the lighting keep up the good work
a fantastic image,,well done,,,
Good shot, well composed
Excellent technique - considering you call yourselves 'beginners!' I'm not sure if the lady intended to flaunt with the camera but the obvious juxtoposition of her thighs worked for me!
Fantastically artistic, with an almost completely natural sensual appeal. I look forward to more of your work and applaud your wife's interest in your 'hobby'
A really good composition that works well for me. I like the lines, curves and colours.
Things to think about are having a smoother surface more evenly lit, losing the bra straps which can distract from the smooth lines etc, having a darker background and lighting in different ways, different expressions - eyes closed, looking down etc.
I like the picture as it is, it is warm, friendly, interesting and engaging.
Keep up the good work
Very nice image, looks like you two are having fun and enjoying the genre. I like the expression and the pose. The diagonal lines formed by the arms enhances the composition. Crop is spot on.
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