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From a long shoot at the weekend this is only the second time my wife has posed following earlier encouragment from this site.

We are both trying to develop our techniques and welcome constructive feedback

Thanks for all those that have commented in the past and for taking the time to view this image

Camera:EOS 30D
Lens:24-105
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:D4
Username:big mc big mc
Uploaded:13 Feb 2009 - 7:08 PM
Tags:General, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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sparrowhawk
sparrowhawk e2 Member 5267 forum postssparrowhawk vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2009 - 7:12 PM

wonderful shot but i think your wife looks a bit uncomfortable. other than that it's a great shot

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Richardtyrrelllandscapes

I think its a nice soft image, however the white balance just don't look right for some reason.
The skin tone looks a little orange, however the exposure is not too bright.

Richie

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DaveGu
DaveGu e2 Member 7DaveGu vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2009 - 7:32 PM

Agree with above about white balance but like the pose and overall feel of the shot. Well done.

Dave.

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miptog
miptog  83532 forum posts United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2009 - 8:08 PM

Like the pose. It would be interesting to see how the pose looks if the model stayed in the same position and you took the shot from an lower and higher angles.

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alfieB
alfieB  7 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 - 8:42 PM

Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence.

I like the pose, composition and lighting.

Not sure about the comments re white balance cos on my monitor it looks OK. But then is my monitor set up correctly ???

Best wishes to you both

alfieB

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kaybee
kaybee  103771 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2009 - 8:55 PM

Good on the two of you.
It is pretty simple but works for me.

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steveuk
steveuk  5 United Kingdom
13 Feb 2009 - 11:53 PM

wow......what a fantastic photo, right proportions and an excellent and sexy model. Looking at all your photos so far, she looks more relaxed and hence the poses are so erotic without revealing too much...

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GrahamNobles
14 Feb 2009 - 6:58 AM

This one works well. A very relaxed expression which draws you in.
Graham

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harrattp
harrattp  7 England4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2009 - 10:05 AM


Quote: Well done to you and your wife, she's a very attractive lady and looks as though she is gaining more confidence. alfieB

Have to agree with Alfie. A very very lucky chap to have your wife also be your model. Tell her we all look forward to seeing her grow even more in confidence as your sessions progress.

Paul

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sawdust
sawdust  872 forum posts
15 Feb 2009 - 11:37 AM

They keep geting better love the lighting keep up the good work

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oneill
oneill  6155 forum posts Ireland
15 Feb 2009 - 2:50 PM

a fantastic image,,well done,,,

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costas
costas e2 Member 6costas vcard Greece2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Feb 2009 - 8:26 PM

Good shot, well composed

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Malvern
Malvern  11 United Kingdom
16 Feb 2009 - 9:11 AM

Excellent technique - considering you call yourselves 'beginners!' I'm not sure if the lady intended to flaunt with the camera but the obvious juxtoposition of her thighs worked for me!
Fantastically artistic, with an almost completely natural sensual appeal. I look forward to more of your work and applaud your wife's interest in your 'hobby'

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Wellspring
16 May 2009 - 9:49 AM

A really good composition that works well for me. I like the lines, curves and colours.

Things to think about are having a smoother surface more evenly lit, losing the bra straps which can distract from the smooth lines etc, having a darker background and lighting in different ways, different expressions - eyes closed, looking down etc.

I like the picture as it is, it is warm, friendly, interesting and engaging.

Keep up the good work

John

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GeorgeMSmith
2 Aug 2009 - 9:58 PM

Very nice image, looks like you two are having fun and enjoying the genre. I like the expression and the pose. The diagonal lines formed by the arms enhances the composition. Crop is spot on.
George

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