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Used a small set of steps as a prop , trying to get a triangular compostion.

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:17-85
Title:Steps
Username:BillS BillS
Uploaded:20 Jan 2007 - 3:05 PM
Tags:Portrait, Portraits / people, Steps
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Duncan_E
Duncan_E  7199 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jan 2007 - 4:41 PM

Nothing wrong with the basic idea, but she's hunched over, gurning so her left eye is squinting, there's too much space at the top, and the overall effect is confusing.

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hebdens
hebdens  8
20 Jan 2007 - 4:54 PM

interesting concept,lovely model, nicely lit.

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RobinF
RobinF  783 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jan 2007 - 8:45 AM

Like the concept Bill, gives a very different viewpoint. Great portrait! - Robin

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thorn
thorn  10124 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jan 2007 - 12:06 PM

Hi Bill,
Good lighting and shading,i agree her shoulders look hunched but your idea about trying to make a triangle is a good one.She's a good model.
Good work.
Take care.AnnSmile

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