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looking in a different way to a station.

Camera:EOS 350D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:steal construction
Username:birgit birgit
Uploaded:24 Oct 2009 - 9:51 PM
Tags:Architecture
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baclark
baclark  53740 forum posts United Kingdom24 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2009 - 10:56 PM

Love the lines, shapes and colours in this. Makes a good abstract.
Barbara

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pamelajean Critique Team 8773 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1604 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2009 - 7:56 PM

Hello, Birgit. Looking in a different way will often reveal something that others might not see, and this does make an excellent abstract that has interesting lines and contrasts, as well as minimal colours. You have good exposure and detail throughout. I like the way you have framed the construction with some of the bars, but in my modification I rotated and cropped it a little, just to eliminate some of the outer distractions, and also to get that main bar on the diagonal and falling into the corners. After that, I only adjusted the contrast a little. My second modification is in black-and-white, which I think the image lends itself to nicely.
Pamela.

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NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
25 Oct 2009 - 10:13 PM

hi,
i like abstracts extracted from architectural detail and i am usually the first to suggest adding diagonals into the composition but on this occasion i think the front diagonal bracing is a little overpowering and is obscuring some of the interesting details such as those gorgeous curved riveted trusses.
given that this was the best abstract selection from the structure, which was probably the case as they are often complex, i agree with Pamela above in that it would make a great mono.

nice effort, its always looking up, you see many things that others miss.
regards
Phil

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