I love the composition and the depth of color on the horses, however I feel that the mountains are a little washed out. this could potentially be fixed while shooting with a grad filter, or using a filter in light-room (or some such editing software). Also if you had waited for a few seconds then the horse coming into the frame on the left would be fully in, at the moment he is cut off a little and so the "herd" doesn't feel quite balanced, however these are all good things to see in hindsight and this would still be a picture I would be proud to have taken.

This is a great idea and is nicely executed. the editing is good and creates an evocotive portrait. For me there is an immense sense of loss, however I think that the viewers overriding personality will inform whether they see hope or loss........... The only thing that gives a confusing message is the use of colour in the reflection. I think that if the reflection was all "Sepia" then there would be a greater separation of reality from "Dream". However you have a really great eye.